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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just for future reference, when you promise another chapter, it's prudent to either post it within the same year, or at least provide some reason why you haven't/won't. Otherwise, I'd say your story could use some work. You move the story along a bit too quickly. You need to provide more details in some areas. It just seems like you'd gotten in too much of a hurry to be done with the chapter. The first one was relatively good. I'd also recommend seeking the aid of a beta-reader. If you're interested, here's my references.
All I Need: http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=32299 I wrote this June 29, 2004. It's nothing to write home about, but it is relatively good. And, no, I don't usually use betas. This story's no exeption.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/130789/ This is my fanfiction.net profile. I have three stories here, and two, at least, are worth a look. I'll let you read them to find out which. *grins sheepishly* Ok, yeah... this is sorta a shameless plug, but... you know how it is, I'm sure. Anyway, if you wish my assistance, just e-mail me.
Work, love and dance,
Goruda
All I Need: http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=32299 I wrote this June 29, 2004. It's nothing to write home about, but it is relatively good. And, no, I don't usually use betas. This story's no exeption.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/130789/ This is my fanfiction.net profile. I have three stories here, and two, at least, are worth a look. I'll let you read them to find out which. *grins sheepishly* Ok, yeah... this is sorta a shameless plug, but... you know how it is, I'm sure. Anyway, if you wish my assistance, just e-mail me.
Work, love and dance,
Goruda
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, your a bitch you know that? Update the story, it's been a really long time since you've updated.
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh!! I love the story. I don't see lots of Scott/Kurt Fanfics out there only a couple of them. I hope you update soon. Cause I can't wait to read more of this great fic.
Laters for now!
www.anzwers.org/trade/lupichan/index.htm (<----------A Yami/Yugi site, from Yugioh) Bye!
Laters for now!
www.anzwers.org/trade/lupichan/index.htm (<----------A Yami/Yugi site, from Yugioh) Bye!
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol... this was a great chapter.. I loved when Kurt called her a whore in his mind ... that was too funny... ut dut didja know you repeated the same chapter 7 times? ... well thanks for the ahhh updates.. keep 'em coming... Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol nothing like eminent death to get people to open up huh?... This is going to be great I can tell.. I hope that everything turns out okay and gets back to normal... Then Scott and Kurt can discover just what that blue body of his can really do ne? Thanks for the update ... keep 'em coming.. Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more now... please... yeah Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>