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October 10, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Hoping for more of this story
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July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story if yours is among some of the best fan fiction I have ever read. I love the plot of the story, and Emma/Rouge is a pairing you don't often see, which is refreshing. I can't wait for you to finish the story, I'm eager to read each and every new chapter you add.
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm dissapointed. I expected Jean/Emma by now, not this. And you have a knack for insulting men. NOT A GOOD THING!
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good shit,
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I almost panicked when I couldn't find "May the Best Telepath Win" but I gotta say I am lovin the re-vamp!! I'm glad you've gone back over the story to include more interaction with the X-Men before involving Hellfire. Excellent, keep the updates coming!!
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January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story hope you update soon
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In case you need more in encouragement:
MOAR PLEASE!
This is grrrrrrrreat
MOAR PLEASE!
This is grrrrrrrreat
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and especially love your take on Seene!
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapter 4, that was pretty kinky indeed. Would have never thought you'd take that route first. Though may I inquire that when Scott and Emma has mental sex, I don't think they did all that movement in their beds as they dreamed. Maybe whispered each other's names (if they do speak in their sleep) but I don't think movement was there. Still very good friend indeed.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review on Chapter 5
Ok I find the discussion between Emma and Frost totally one sided. I feel that they both are wrong in an aspect. Emma is wrong because she can't just assume that Rogue can keep her powers (according to the Evolution version) so I believe Jean had a good reason not to add Rogue to the list as her powers were temporary. But I also find Jean wrong for well, not trying hard enough like Scott actually did. I find Emma wrong because she never actually took to see what wrongs Rogue did as well because she did a lot like betray the X-Men once in Evolution kind of making it hard to initially trust her at first. Random but just want to put it out there. on another note i tink you kind of made emma a little too protective. Well good stuff anyway.
Ok I find the discussion between Emma and Frost totally one sided. I feel that they both are wrong in an aspect. Emma is wrong because she can't just assume that Rogue can keep her powers (according to the Evolution version) so I believe Jean had a good reason not to add Rogue to the list as her powers were temporary. But I also find Jean wrong for well, not trying hard enough like Scott actually did. I find Emma wrong because she never actually took to see what wrongs Rogue did as well because she did a lot like betray the X-Men once in Evolution kind of making it hard to initially trust her at first. Random but just want to put it out there. on another note i tink you kind of made emma a little too protective. Well good stuff anyway.