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by EleniD

person Ally
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so effing sexy!!!!
I have not been that wet for a long time!

Great work!
person BJones
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was the first thing I read from this site, I adore McCoy and seeing him as a gay man was a new
and interesting take on him. The fact that he ended up caring for and reforming Creed with his gentle
nature just made the story so sweet! And the sex scenes were well written, very hot tho I'm not usually
one for male on male sex. Bravo!
person Arden
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fabulous my dear! don't be a stranger now!
person AnonGirl88
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whiney voice* Nooooo, I don't want it to be over yet! Write another Victor/Hank story! I never thought I'd ever be glad to have been bored but if I hadn't been I would never have checked out this very surprisingly sweet hot story! Fantastic job, I loved every teeny tiny bit of it. Seriously though, WRITE ANOTHER ONE!!!!!
person Dendey
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAH! *cries in despair*
She did it!!! It's over now! *holw's in pain*
But it was fun!!! *insane laugh* Great work!!! *bows head down to earth in an insanely low bow to reinforce the showing of her worship*...*which she kinda forgot to do after the last chappy*...forgimme? please? *puppy-dog-eyes*

Thank you sooooo much for twelve months of fun, fun, fun aaaaand...smut!!! Gooood smut, but smut none the less ^-^
It was really great to finally be able to read all of it.
Though...one tiny, little point of critique remains...I don't wanna chastise ya, but in November, you mentioned Hank caressing Sabretooth's torso and...you gave Creed scars...is that even possible? Well, from my angle of knowledge Creed's healing factor may not be as strong as Wolverine's, but it should still leave him without scars. It may take the wounds longer to heal, but well...they just don't leave a scar tissue. That was my only problem with your whole story in it's entirety...such a tiny little fact...I sound like a hypocrite for even commenting on the scar-thing, but...I just wanna know if it was a slip-up of some kind or if you gave Victor slightly different abilities than I believe him to have.
On another note...have you thought about one of my challenges? I know you already put an effort into one *peeks over to Naughty*(I just love this one!) Maybe I can even plea my case for another Hank/Creed with you? We'll see, for only time will tell^^
Anyway, please tell me allright?
Ciao
Dendey
person Lina
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::Sob:: It's over... NO I CAN'T BE OVER!!! My future is so dark... so dark!!!! Woe to humanity, it is finished!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!! I believe the rest of the world would agree with me when i say......... SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Arden Skysender
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i would applad you, but i find i am unable to move anything except my fingers to type this. sigh. i do so love this story. keep up the good work. i'll be away for two weeks, so if i dpn't review, that's why, but there will be twice the story to read when i get back, so i'll be sure to leave you a lovely long review. and that was really good. Finally. these two are building a semblance of a relationship, not just hawt sex.lol. not that thats a bad thing. lol. keep up the good work.
person Lina
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW POOR CREED!!!! However.... Love is in the air everywher I look around!!!!!!!! .... and it's messing with my damn allergies!!!!!!
person Dendey
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Raaah! I sooo don't want December to EVER come...but I know it will! *cries*
I don't WANT this story to end...it's just too good to be over! *depressed*
Did I mention that I liked the chapter? Very much so? And that the smut wasn't as conceiled as before? And...that I liked that one too? All of them in fact? *sigh*
Questions over questions...I wonder if there'll be another Hank/Creed out there...after you've finished yours, because...I DID put up that challenge, just like I warned you I might...
Flattering? You? Me? Nah! I'm just telling the truth! ^___^
person Lina
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again KD, I bow in awe at your talent!!!!