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for I saw the sun...

by Tatsel22

person Majjie
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more >< MORE! FINISH IT
person bob
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SHIT!
person Angela
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're right, it is a weak beginning, but it does show promise. Please carry on with it, I would love to see where you go from here.
person myladymystere
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
always liked a Remy/Bobby pairing. you have Remy's talk pretty good -some writters overdo the accent.keep going-looking foward to more :)
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like Bobby. I really do. I especially liked him before they were mean to him and left him stuck in iceform. Which brings me to a question. Wasn't he stuck in ice-form at the time Remy was blind? I assume you're not doing the stuck in ice thing, right?
person BJ
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a first fic! There is more to come right? I like the dots too. I use them alot ;they help set the timing of the fic. So your Bobby's the shy sweet Bobby, not the total jerk they've been writing in the books lately...(see!) good. Bobby should always be shy and sweet. Now back to work!