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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad you put a happy ending on this! Thought it would be nice for her to get some justice for the way the other one hurt her.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your narrations always flow so smoothly but in erotic context it is particularly sublime. I really loved the tone of the story, erotic vs. XXX, it fits Kurt's character perfectly. Of course, if you wanted to go XXX, I'd be ok with that too! :) You make it look so effortless. Tight little story swimming with visualizations. and your trademark sympathic heroine. Veryyyyy nice.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always did like this story and now that you've added to it, I like it even more. Jenny and Kurt are a wonderful couple and I wish them the very best. They both deserve it.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way it ended. If the rapist turned the pleasantness of something unreal into pain, the solution is to turn the pain of something unreal into a real pleasantness!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did real good, thanks for a good read!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
little dark but good ,keep going you have a nice style
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...
I liked this a lot. Lots of descriptives. You really do write second person well; it's something even I can't do. At least not with the same ease you do. Will there be any more chapters to this? I'd love to read more!
I liked this a lot. Lots of descriptives. You really do write second person well; it's something even I can't do. At least not with the same ease you do. Will there be any more chapters to this? I'd love to read more!