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Oh gosh! Sooo good. I have tears in my eyes. That is no easy thing to achieve. The only bad critique I have for you is spelling - go proofread your story and fix all the little spelling errors and this story will be nothing short of perfect. It was a bit out of character for them both but the way you cacooned the events of the story make it work wonderfully. Well done ^.^
~Missy Misfortune
"Going with the flow isn't so foolish, as long as it takes your forward.".¸¸·´¯`·.¸¸.ஐ

My God... you have absolutely no right to be writing fanfiction. I've read four of your stories, and all four of them have smart plots, sexy as hell, are cleverly written, and have wonderful characterizations. To me they look flawless. If you do not write professionally, you missed your calling. What I think I like the most about you (Next to your grasp of the characters) is the fact that you aren't afraid of sex. You describe these sex scenes as incredibly steamy, but I can also see real people engaging in these scenes. It seems like a lot of writers on this site tend to make the scenes unrealistic and too romance novel, but you don't have that problem. You have no right to be writing fanfiction... but thank God that you do.

Great Googaly Moogaly! The grooviness of you!

Damn! Whether or not there's any more to this, that was beautiful. I actually was a bit teary at their parting. Nice, nice work.

Hey

This fic is good...one of the few x-men ones i like. It is written well and your characterization is lovely. I also love the sexy Kurt. You describe him in a different light that appeals to me.
Update soon!!!

yay, the story continues. um, i don't have anything else to comment on at this time. maybe next chapter. get it out soon.

i'm not really a fan of rape fics, so it's a good thing i don't really consider this rape. it was a bit nonconcensual but i think kitty wanted it as much as kurt. i do like how kitty turned the roles around and did the same to kurt to prove a point. this was an excellent character study of how a couple wrong turns can lead to such extreme actions. i hope this isn't the end. i would like to see how they can (or can't) get together and mend their relationship again.

Nice. Is this the ending, or do you have more in store for this? Either way, it's good.

God damn!! Cha 3 w 3 was great!! Talk about lemony fireworks for the mutant couple. I wasn't expecting that to happen so soon but I'm glad it did. Update soon!

This fanfic is great!! I started reading it yesterday and was instantly pulled in by it's realness and depth of character development. Please update soon so we can see if Kitty and Kurt will finally make up or if their friendship is gone for good!