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by Pyro

person DarkBloodPhoenix
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow you really know your subway ingredients LOLOLOL nice story though
person Spazzi
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
La, that last line is too perfect XD.
person Spazzi
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eheheh, poor Johnny XD;;;...I do hope thats Remy ^^.
person Spazzi
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was...very confusing, but still good. I suggest rewriting it XD;.
person CAL
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... You write slash quite well... are you sure you aren't actually a homosexual male?

Check.

Check now.

person The Chelsinator
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mildy confusing. Interesting though.

Remy talking in third person is cute. Almost too cute...

Upfuckindate dammit
person DemonBlaze
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far this is a fave of my slash couples
person Chen Li
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. Pyro and Gambit. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but basically, this is pretty good.
person ManKiller
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update, dammit.
person CybrEmly01
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Gag me with a spoon" is from a movie named "Heathers". It's a cult classic.
Don't ask me why, I am without a clue. Though the male lead is cute, in a
freaky psychotic/homicidal kinda way.

Ja,
CybrEmly

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