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i didn't think it was that bad. i thought it was quite good, the smut actaully became like bonus part in it, like finding an extra five dollar bill in your pants pocket. if there was any smut. . . .sorry, i have an exceedingly bad memeory.:) but anyhoo, that was a really good ending! i was wondering how you were goingto just end a story in a chapter, and you pulled it off very very well. i think it opened the door for a wide range of storylines and changes. i can't wait to read the next sotry!!!

aww, really? i thought it was a really cool story.

This isn't confusing at all to me. Should that be a worry? 'Cause it doesn't
bother me at all.

I'd say "Happy Easter" but the ducks and geese would assassinate me. They're
boycotting the holiday religeously. *giggle* Bad pun, I know. Couldn't help
myself.

Ja,
CybrEm

I usually love reading your stories, I mean they are always the best ones on this site, but these last two long ones are ...well...have been really hard to get into. They do not have the same flair of your previous visions and this one especially has been really boring. I will continue to read your works as they have some of the best pairings ever but I hoou aou are being truthful when you say that in ch. 42 you will get to the point. Thanks.

wow. just ending it there eh? although this story was a bit confusing, i thought that was part of the mystery. once the pieces were in place things would start making sense. have you ever seen the movies 12 monkeys or fight club. those are two pretty whacked out movies that can really confuse, but once you see the ending you go "so that's how it went down. that's so cool!" i was figuring that this story was like that. yet, i also understand when a story flies off the wire on you and you have to stop and reevaluate things. i had to do that with my story i've been working on too. anyway, good luck with getting back to basics. by the way, what are the basics? lol.

I have ben reading your stories ever since I found this site a few weks ago and just want to say thank you for the terriffic stories I have now caught up on them and hope you post many more. They are truly excellant. Thank you Otak the Canadian

Is it possible to be an Apprentice Fount of Useless Information? If so, I think
that's what I am.

Happy April Fool's Day, by the way. My one and only prank for today was to stink
up my brother's room with nail polish and non-acetone remover. I wonder if he'll
be high in the morning? Oh, don't worry, I aired it out some. Even though it was
snowing.

Anyways, brilliant as per usual. And don't worry 'bout the whole "confusion" aspect
of the story. If some ppl don't get it they can just read it again when you've finished
with this one. That's what I do when I don't understand something. That and ask
someone who actually -knows- the subject matter.

Sorry, been watching/reading lots of investigative shows/stories.

Ja,
CybrEm

Yeah, but isn't Phobos supposed to be male? *muttering to self* I need a copy of
"Who's Who in Greek and Roman Mythology" or something.

Anyways, splendid. And, just wondering this bit, do you let your peeps get a little stale
before you eat them? A friend of mine does. She opens the package and leaves them
alone for a week or so. I've tried them, it's actually quite good.

Ja,
CybrEm

Just wanted to say, this is my favorite of your series so far! I guess I just have a thing for weird metallic implant stories. I wanna know what's going to happen! I'm confused, but in a good, suspense-filled type way. Yay!