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for Family Ties

by Nemain

person Anon
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good story - jumps around a bit too much sometime fol follow easily, but good anyway. Any chance that when you update in future you could change your summary to reflect the added chapters? With just numbers and no ch. titles it's hard to remember where you left off - so I have to go hunting to figure out what I read last. THX.
person Xandia
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Inteeg. Ag. Although I did find Rogue's "Cody was a jerk long before I left" (paraphrasing here) kid of odd, since in the one episode we saw him in, he seemed rather socially inept (he was a nervous wreck asking Rogue to dance, iirc) but then again, this is your own evo continuity.
person cygnavamp
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yipee! You read my suggestion! (Does a little happy dance.) I think you and I are the only ones who write Togue. Or is it Rodd? I like Togue better. Both sound naughty.
person sayin_girl
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Amazing. Have I ever told you that, because you are. Seriously. I am humbled by your incredible skills. Please grant me the privilage of reading more of your amazing work. Please! It's like ddicddiction now! I need more! More Kurt and Kitty! More Remmy and Jubilee! Did you know that I had never seen that pairing before but now, thanks to you, I can't read the Remy/Rogue ones because they just seem wrong. Don't worry, I think it's great! Keep it up, and I'll keep reviewing and filling your head with praise. Later.
person Li
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally someone has realized Colossus’s potential as a Kurtty villain! He gives me the creeps. How dare he hurt Kurt! I hope the big schmuck and his undersized member get what’s coming to him.

I think Amara needs serious psychotherapy. The girl has issues. Poor Lance. I hope they pull through and whip out the candles soon. Smut isn't the same without them.

Tabby has some issues too. I wonder what they could be?

Looks like Todd has some interesting competition.

The whole roadtrip to the concert was very funny. Those see seem destined to fight and cause trouble. Poor Warren

Speaking of which, I didn’t know Angel liked the Sex Pistols?

Keep them coming!
person Cin
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thank goodness you have a new story. i was really begining to miss the "ForeverVerse". so far you have me wanting more. i can't wait to see what you do. update soon please
person cygna
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm a big fan of your stories and I have a suggestion. Could you throw in a scene where Rogue and Todd have a little fun in the shower? On one of safe days, of course. I love showers!
person Li
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Breast milk shakes?! Yuck! Stupid Evan. I look forward to the next chapters.

person sayin_girl
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love all of your stories in the forever universe! You are a master! I bow down to your masterful writing skills, seriously! Keep writileaslease, since I am now fully addicted to your writing style and cannot wait for more! I love how you portray Kurt and Kitty, their relationship, and the way that they always pull through all the shit life throughs at them together! More, More, More, More! Pretty Please! With sugar(Or whatever sweet conffection that you prefer) on top! Ooh, ooh, ooh! And I totally love Kurt's family! I hope they come in soon! and poor Jubes. I must know what happens! Anyways, I'll be on the look out for more, and promise to review again!

person sayin_gi ã
schedule January 6, 1920 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More! I'm so addicted to this its pathetic really. I love your stories, and wait in eager anticipation for the next chapters. Keep it coming. Please. Pretty please. Look I've been reduced to begging. Oh well, long as I get to read more I don't care. So with that said, MORE CHAPTERS SOON PLEASE!!!