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Can you say mutant version of Days of Our Lives? Those poor kids, wait around the Institute long enough and just about any bad thing possible is going to happen to one of them eventually. I still think you need to come up w/someone for poor Evan. I know you don't really like him (guy hardly ever makes an appearance), but my God, he must be about dying from sexual frustration by now considering what's always going on around there. LOL. Ah well, screw Evan (or not), I got my Kurtty fix. ^_~

Interesting that Kitty's phone plays "Ride of the Valkyrie" when it rings. It was composed by Richard Wagner. (Distant relation, perhaps?) Most people think that piece is called "Kill the Wabbit"!

Okay, that was just a plain mean spot to end the chapter. LOL. Well, at least if Evan's the only one in your universe who never gets any, he'll at least get the satisfaction of tormenting Logan and 'Ro for a little (before Logan threatens to gut him anyway). Get that poor boy a girlfriend - heck, even Jamie and Rahne and getting it on, poor Evan must be about to explode from sexual frustration.

Curse you evil cliffhangers of doom! Curse you all to hell!

I have to say I LOVE your forever stories. I like this one very much so far but I have only been able to read up to chapter 3 since I am busy writting my own Evolution Fic (which I would not have even writing if you had not inspired me to do so with your stories) I would like it very much if you gave my story a go. Anyway I love your stories . I really Like Kurt and Todd's personalities in these stories. I could go on and on But I am sure you have heard it all before lol. Just know I LOVE your Evolution stories very very much.

I'm so confused. Trying to keep track of all the different plots going on is making my head spin. It seems like you could actually have turned this into two almost completely unrelated stories. I want my Kurtty back. ^_~

I have followed your work since I first saw it on Internutter’s site. I have always end itd it and thought you one of the better fanfiction writers out there today. So I feel I have to comment on the direction of your new foreververse story. Even with all the horrible things that have happened to Kitty in your stories, I felt there was always a strong fantasy element to it. It is probably a testament to how good a writer you are, but the last chapter was “too” real for me. As a survivor of that, it brought back a lot of bad memories. It really caught me off guard. It is probably the most difficult thing to write in any genre and it pains me that many use it as a cheap plot device(mostly the 15 year olds on ff.net). I certainly don’t think you are, but you are entering an area far beyond anything you’ve ever written. I would never tell anyone how to write their story, but part of me really hopes you back off and don’t do it --even if it means a cliched heroic Hollywood type ending to the situation. Damage has already been done to that character’s psyche just by the attempt, so you really don’t need to go through with the hideous act to further any development.

***This isn't a review but a response to one (because as I've said befo'm 'm not so huge a dork as to review my own stories, LOL.) I wanted the reviewer (Anna) to read this but I could not get it sent through email because it bounced me repeatedly. This is no more personal than what she wrote to me on a public review board so I hope it does not offend... If it does, email me privately.***



Hi! First, I want to say thank you for the feedback; I really
appreciate it. And second, I apologize for making it seem like a cheap
plot device. I am a survivor of years of sexual abuse and rape myself,
so I think I understand the feeling of "too real", though for each that
experience of having your memories resurface is different. I just
wanted to let you know that there will *not* be a rape ins fis fic and
that Amara saves herself... I will admit that it's probably part of my
catharsis, having her do that. And I do plan on her having some sort of
therapy because of the incident, because as you pointed out, she's
already "damaged" just by the attempt. If there is ever anything in my
stories that offends you or you feel is just plain "wrong," please let
me know.

awesome as always. please update soon. i luv your stuff. Lance will be the one to save Amara, right? gotta be.

Love chapter 32. Great turnaround for Bobby's folks. By the way, is it me, or is Evan the only one who isn't getting any from anyone the poor guy?