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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gah! You said no angst between stories! *flames authoress like he did to Tergon's dark cookie fic* One odd thing I noticed was that Jono's dialogue had no asterisks or quotation marks as it did previously. Besides that, this is a fantabulous fic. Not that your others weren't, I just can't think of a better compliment at 2 in the AM. *yawn*
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October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you know suddenly i have this vision of a nude scene with halle berry coming on, everyone stares at the screen, then slowly turn to storm. then back. and forth.....
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
“You really try to do too much for them sometimes.”
This sentence reminded me of "Spider-man", when Peter's aunt is telliing him how he works so hard, he's not superman. I just find that really funny. I really like your work and I was hoping that somewhere in the near future, you will write about Kitty and Kurt having a baby. I would really like to see what Kurt's reaction to THAT would be. I think that would be a really great idea if you worte somethiing about that. Love ya and hope to read more from you soon!
This sentence reminded me of "Spider-man", when Peter's aunt is telliing him how he works so hard, he's not superman. I just find that really funny. I really like your work and I was hoping that somewhere in the near future, you will write about Kitty and Kurt having a baby. I would really like to see what Kurt's reaction to THAT would be. I think that would be a really great idea if you worte somethiing about that. Love ya and hope to read more from you soon!
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I loved it, plain and simple. Of course, I've loved all of your stories, so I guess it's nothing new. Anyhow, I just wanted to thank you once again for writing these stories for us all to read, and to say that I'm eagerly awaiting the next story.
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A Very nice epilogue. I hope the human-mutant thing didn't come across as some sort of harsh criticism, I didn't mean for it to come across like that if it did. It was more of just an observation than anything else.
Anyway, ike I said before, the epiloguevery nice, wrapping up somethings, but hinting at some others (and I hope Xavier doesn't mind needles, CT scans require IV's. Of course, I'm sure you already know that), nice job!
Anyway, ike I said before, the epiloguevery nice, wrapping up somethings, but hinting at some others (and I hope Xavier doesn't mind needles, CT scans require IV's. Of course, I'm sure you already know that), nice job!
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Strange. This is the second time that a girl at the institute has used Sam to make their boyfriend jealous....
Oh, at anyrate, a very nice chapter, although is it me, or is the institute starting to seem very closed off? Barely any non-mutant humans visit, and seemingly with the exception of Jean's folks, (and to a lesser extent, Bobby's) when they do, they're just plain old jerks or bad news (even Amanda, one of the few positive humans on the show, has become pretty bleh in this timeline), forget the hint of a mutant involved with a human, it seems they just can't get along.
Oh, at anyrate, a very nice chapter, although is it me, or is the institute starting to seem very closed off? Barely any non-mutant humans visit, and seemingly with the exception of Jean's folks, (and to a lesser extent, Bobby's) when they do, they're just plain old jerks or bad news (even Amanda, one of the few positive humans on the show, has become pretty bleh in this timeline), forget the hint of a mutant involved with a human, it seems they just can't get along.
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No!! it can't be the end!!!!!!!!!!!
what happened with paige and jono (you really haven't given them a chance to grow as a couple---or a couple of horny teenagers--- you know)!
also it would be nice to see greaterentiention given to amara/lance and rogue/todd just because you write a wonderful build up and then just let their stories fall!
what happened with paige and jono (you really haven't given them a chance to grow as a couple---or a couple of horny teenagers--- you know)!
also it would be nice to see greaterentiention given to amara/lance and rogue/todd just because you write a wonderful build up and then just let their stories fall!
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nemain, I'm floored once again. I can't imagine a better written story than the stories you write. They really do transcend normal fan fiction to become incredible stories. I can't wait for the epilogue to "Family Ties," and I'm also eagerly awaiting a brand new story from you. It's like looking forward to birthdreseresents. You don't know what you're going to get, but you're sure you'll love it. I'm guessing that you'll deal with Rahne and Jamie in the new one. I've never seen the pairing anywhere else, but I have to tell you I love the way you write them. Anyhow, thanks for yet another great story, and I'm breathless with anticipation for the new one.
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhhhh New Story! New story! New story! New story! Wheeeeee! I can't wait! But Kurt's leaving, awe. I hope nothing bad happens to him. Like some hussy who thinks she can take him from Kitty. You wouldn't do that, would you? I might have to hurt you if ya do. I love Kurt and Kitty's relationship. Gives me hope that true love really does exsist in the world. Please don't crush that, I beg you! Love your stories! More soon!