rate_review Reviews

I loved the Mystique one! She is my favorite character. She is just so unappreciated in fanfiction. I loved the little touch about her wanting to hear Lance say he wanted to be with the true “her” rather than her other forms like Tabitha. I would love to see a future story with those two. The Rogan chapter was just awesome! We Rogan shippers are a small but hearty bunch in Evo. Can’t forget Betsy/Remy either. Wha What a about a geeky Scott and sultry Emma combo? Anyway you could work in Pete Wisdom with Jean? Or Evan/Callisto?

I would never have thought of Lance/Mystique, but the way you wrote it made perfect sense. It was so good. I also feel like Mystique and Lance should be paired together more often after reading this. For some strange reason I would like to see Todd as a frog prince and Jean as a princess. When she kisses him, he turns into Pietro. I like the Kurt as a pirate idea with Amanda. Scott/Amara and Sam/Dani would be good also.

Yuji: Hey not bad
Yumi: Sweet lemons!
Yuji: Is that all you think about?
Yumi: Again not illegal
Yuji: Can we make requests?
Yumi: We kinda gotten into the whole Kurt/Lance smut thanks to Inner Conflicts which isn't bad at all
Yuji: So can you make a-
Yumi: LEMON!! Please!
Yuji: Uh right
Yumi: Please Lance and Kurt!
Yuji: Bye!

I suggest a jamie/jubilee or anyone in a space or ancient greek mythology theme, other than that love the fic love the variation in parings.
Also could u try a evan marrow paring?

Okay, once again you've managed to top yourself!! How can you keep coming up with these amazing lemons? The pairings and role playing alone makes this an interesting series, but you still manage to make them really, REALLY HOT every single time! Even if they're characters I never really cared about before, I get captivated by every single chapter. Also, thumbs way up on that threesome, I don't think I've quit blushing for 3 days! I normally don't get into anything remotely yaoi or slash, but that was really steamy. (And major thanks for giving us a Mystique fic! I never would have thought of her and Lance, and that was so hot) Now we need a Pietro fic, and a Kurt, but I don't know who they should be with. I'm desperate for some hetero Pietro smut! (I'm drawn to Quicksilver just because of his damn voice. Richard Cox drives me insane ever since I fell for Inuyasha!!!) MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Three ace chapters! Triple cool with knobs. I'll review each in order. " and and Ice"--Allow me to pick my jaw up off the floor and find a clean pair of panties. I've read my fair share of lemons, hentai, and erotica, but I really think I can say that this ranks in my top five of hot stories. I'm dead, fucking serious. I can't think of a lemon that has ever turned me on more. I liked everything about, everything you described in the "warning", the characters, everything. You kick ass. "Young Teacher"--Perfect. Just perfect. So perfect, I nearly cried. It had all the elements of what makes that fantasy great: guilt, illicitness, emotions, the understated power struggle. Kitty and Piotr were beyond fabulous for this chapter, and I hadn't even thought of them for it. You are brilliant. "What You Want"--Shockingly great. This was another chapter that I rolled my eyes at when I read the pairing, but by the end I felt like Mystique and Lance should be paired together much more often. The overstated power struggle was awesome, as was the comprimise at the end. 're 're description was perfect; it's turbulent, in the best way. I think it may be the most emotional and sincere chapter so far, which is surprising because they do seem like they should just be a "rough and tumble with bits of humor" kind of couple. You are now in my pantheon of gods. You are the goddess of citrus and sex. I cannot wait to see what you do next. I'd love to see some pure slash or femslash, but that's up to you. You write amazing threesomes, so I dn'dn't complain if you did another one, or maybe a foursome like Pyro suggested. ^-^ And after actually seeing Danielle Moonstar, I'm all for that suggestion some one made about her earlier. ::bows to Mishka and scampers off happily::

this kicks ass!
u should have a dominant-female in one - someone needs a dominatrix!
also Kurt and Amanda role-playing as a devil seducing an angel; that'd be cute.

*Faints* Oh mah GOD! *shakes head trying to not concentrate on Piotr* Whooo! Geez, that was awfully nice, Mish.....which is the calmer way of putting it...I mean, I've read this chappie already, just haven't gotten around to submitting a review yet...*slaps her hand* bad me! hehehe....uhm...ahem...more?

Like, totally wow man. I've been following this since it began with Beast and Storm, and I must say I love it. Call me hentai if you will, but I can't get enough of your stories, and the pairings are simply great. Almost makes me wish I were Tabitha. *giggles* You're a great writer, and I look forward to reading more.

*picks her jaw UP off of da floor* HOLY CRAP! Mish! I knew you said it was *blush* worthy, but I can't stop it! *shoves two ice packs to here* Ge* Good LORD! *wipes the steam off of her screen for the THIRD time* geez...*fans self* WHOOO! mish, this was absobloodylutely kinky! *runs to take a cold shower*