rate_review Reviews

eeeeeek, why stop there?! I agree with everyone: stop teasing us and add more. PLLLEEEEASE!

there is too much tension between those two for it to be all about Jean. i loved the pairing and you write really well.i know it has been awhile since you started this ( i'm new to this site) but i would enjoy reading a few more chapters if you find the time to add more. thank you for your story. raxx

I must say simple yet very delicious.

This story is soooooooo good!!! I love the passion and how eager they both were!!! Write another chapter then email me when u did it!!!

Definatly a great pairing. Please, please, please write more. Perhaps a prequl as well as a sequal.

you are going to do a follow up, right? Plz? Pretty plz with a cherry on top? that was very yummy.

You should make a sequel to this! It's really good. If you do or already did, can you please email me at the address above aell ell me the name? Thank you soo much! I love this story!! Keep up the great writing!!

I like it. I think it's a good pairing.

At least, Logan thought he was staring at the lake.
Unnecesary comma

He couldn't see shit underneath that visor, especially in the darkness of the moonless night.
Makes it sound like it's Scott that can't see with the visor on, at first.

Sex scene had a nice build up. I could picture what they were doing well, and they seemed in character for it.

nipping at his tongue
I think that would be pretty hard to actually accomplish and would hurt a lot if it worked.

All in all I thought it was very engaging, the writing flowed well, and the smut was described in a compelling manner. It was erotic and sexy and didn't include any words or descriptions that made me want to snort my soda. Good work Eil, I have always liked your erotica. Keep up the good work!

I love it!!!!!! I so love it!!!!! Why did it have to end there??? Arghhhhhhhh.I WAI WANT MORE!!!! lmao. No I am not psycho. Seriously I loved it. Gotta love Wolfie and Cyclops. *g*