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for Playing with Fire

by taekwondodo

person CybrEmly01
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want a Kurt of my very own. I'd hug him, and snuggle him, and smother him
in kisses. And feed him near constantly. The X-rated things I wanna do to him
are nobody's business but mine. *wink*

Update ASAP please!

Ja,
CybrEmly
person bluefooted
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! It hath been updated! Thank you sooo much. Now I feel guilty for being lazy and not working on the comic this week... Very nice chapter - I really like your character's interactions. (I say your characters because they really are above and beyond the cardboard cutouts on the kid's show) The Logan/Professor conversation was great - perfect tone, I think, for two people with very different ideals discussing young kids they both care about. I like how you tied in your other works (I knew you would, of course). Anyway, lot! Pt! Please keep going - as long as you want.
Blue
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Soooo happy you've updated. Can't wait for more.
person rubberduck
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, what can i say. the power of your prose is perfect. hehe. alliteration. gotta love it. anyway, i'm glad we finally got to know what has been eating kurt to bits and it was nice to see kitty stand by her man, but really, what else could she do? my two favourite mutants are just so sweet together. just wish kitty would come back to the comics too.
person neokey
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! You are a really great writer, and I can't wait to read more.
person superbakagirl
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aw, so sad. Poor kurt. Very well written though.
person Anonymous
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
they story is great- wot can i say? i just love it
i'm hanging on to every word and can't wait to see wot happens next
please update asap
person Ami
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so far, and hope for an update soon.

Ami
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another wonderful chapter! This story (i won't use fic, this is SO much better than that) continues to blow me out of the water with its depth and passion. I love it, and I am your humble slave waiting for more. The only thing, again, I wish could be changed is the formating. o.O;; But I have problems with getting it to show up correctly too, so I really can't comment on that. -_-;; So, keep up the excellent work and next chapter us as soon as possible. I don wonder though, what ever happened to the guy hiding in the woods. Hmmmm. . .

Any way, Great work!

Sephira jo
person broken_oddity
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....................very well written......it was sort of like a breakdown that kurt was afraid of happening.t ist is lucky he has someone to be there to listen. i wish i could take a really big stick to that ert ert though........*does so in my imagination*....can't wait for the next chapter!