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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry guess i was wrong looking at www.ageofconsent.com the age in NY is 17
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for taking so long to review, I've been kinda busy lately.
Anyway, I've finally got round to it and wow... awsome chapter. I was actually cringing at parts of it, just the sheer cold brutality of the army guys makes me feel sick and yet... yet... at the same time I feel kinda sorry for the ones that died... I suppose I'm just a soft touch. man manage to get a wonderful feeling of terror here, and of despair. The mention of 'breeding' with Jean is scary to say the least. The worst (or best, depending on how you're talking about it,) is tay iay it all sounds so very believable. I was especialy impressed by the relationships you develop with your OC's. In short an excellent, if heart wrending chapter, once more I'm sorry for taking so long to review. Keep it up though!
Anyway, I've finally got round to it and wow... awsome chapter. I was actually cringing at parts of it, just the sheer cold brutality of the army guys makes me feel sick and yet... yet... at the same time I feel kinda sorry for the ones that died... I suppose I'm just a soft touch. man manage to get a wonderful feeling of terror here, and of despair. The mention of 'breeding' with Jean is scary to say the least. The worst (or best, depending on how you're talking about it,) is tay iay it all sounds so very believable. I was especialy impressed by the relationships you develop with your OC's. In short an excellent, if heart wrending chapter, once more I'm sorry for taking so long to review. Keep it up though!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I dont know about where you live but here in alaska the age of consent is 16
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep going!!!!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You are so incredibly evil and so incredibly amazing all at the same time. That was truly an awesome chapter, you did such a great job describing the pain and horror that poor Kurt must have been going through. I can't wait for more, this is so so so so good! Please continue soon.
Queequegg
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, TKD... you're an evil, evil woman to leave it like that! But, I love you for it!
Great chapter - I get a nice, warm, fuzzy feeling just thinking about all the elf torture that's yet to come. And Jean torture, too. Also nice. And thank goodness someone finally cut that kid's hair! Jeez, kids these days - darned hippies! :)
Great chapter - I get a nice, warm, fuzzy feeling just thinking about all the elf torture that's yet to come. And Jean torture, too. Also nice. And thank goodness someone finally cut that kid's hair! Jeez, kids these days - darned hippies! :)
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry with the Kurtness!!!!! Please Please Please
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hyperventilates* OH MY LORD! This has to be one of my favorite stories! I started reading it a couple of weeks ago and haven't been able to stop. I didn't want to review until I was done completely with what you have put up and I must say, I've bit almost all my finger nails off with the last three chapters. Good god, what will happen next?? You are such a talent and thank you for sharing this with us all. Now that I've gushed completely over this story, I must go and write more of mine. Ta!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm . . . I wonder how long it will take for the students to see through the lie and try something, ... scary thought 40 or so mutants storming a facilitie. This story keeps getting better and better.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter, I'm so happy... Hope to see more soon!