rate_review Reviews

I don't know if you really care but I get hired to read transcripts for novels on a near regular basis tho my expertira is limited to the editorial company that I'm currently contracted with I have to say that if you took more time with your character developement and IF you found original characters that you loved as much as these then I might be tempted to say that you COULD have a book series that would put on par or dare I say better than certain writers like John irvine...
maybe

Please, please, please finish this one? I read this sometime ago on Fur & Brimstone and it just about killed me to have poor Kurt trapped in the dark for so long. My hubby thought I'd lost my mind when I ran out of story without finding an ending and was howling at the computer.

Still hoping this will be continued soon. It's one of my favorites, and I'd love to be able to see move on.

If you're still having trouble with the formatting, what I've been doing lately is having Word make the chapter as an htm file, and that leaves in the bolds and italics and stuff. Inside Word it's just like a doc, except it doesn't keep track of pages anymore. Then I just post the htm file.

/Cheers on Taek.

I know I've reviewed this story before, right now I just wanted to say how much I still enjoy it and I hope you do get a chance to finish it soon. It's not often you find a good story with PLOT floating around these archives.

You do have some typos riddled throughout the chapters. I'd be glad to take a fine tooth comb to this if you like. I'd also be glad to do the html formatting for you. ^___~

Please add something new soon so I don't have to give into my urges to hunt you down and make you write. XD Then again, that's the pot calling the kettle black...*whistles innocently*

Thanks for the awesome story! ^___^

I really love what you have so far, and I cannot wait for you to get another chapter up. Please, Please Hurry!!!!

Wow, very scary and good, can't wait for next chapter.
Really gets the heart beating.

I've just seen when you last updated please god update again soon, I really hate it when I cant finish a story, SO PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOMETIME.

Love it, love it, love it! I read nearly all of it in one sitting, and absolutely love the storyline. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Good stuff! Kurt and Kitty are my favorite parring from this fandom. My only critique is that you stutter when you type. If you are doing your drafts in Word, you can set the grammar check to catch those double words. I'm glad you found a beta reader, the only thing holding up your stories are mechanical errors.

Love to see you working on this again. There was a thing awhile back where the AFF databases were corrupted and parts of chapters came up missing, and words would get smooshed together. You might want to give the whole story a read, because when I went back to it after you edited, I saw some of the smooshing errors still.

Thank you for restoring the first chapter, because it's absolutely required to get into the story that follows.

And finally... Kurt's been howling at those walls for a long time now... help him?! Please?

(Been still working on the sequel to SATK... if you want to catch up on my works =) )