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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey,
wanted to let you know i really enjoyed reading your fan fic. it's a guitly pleasure for me that i love to indulge in every once in a while, but i'm extremely picky and when i'm see something too long i look it over for a shorter ficlet. your story kept me enthralled and , from what i can tell, was written by someone who has talent and has spent much time refining that talent. it's got suspense, humor (very important), serious but not too much, and most importantly romance and lust. i must say that is the second thing i'm picky about; if the scene is too graphic (leaves nothing to imagination) it's just obscene, but your love scenes are just right. the plot takes turns which also very important, things hinted at in the beginning re-remerge later, you follow through. i hope to see what the next chapter holds in store and that you'll continue with this endevour.
wanted to let you know i really enjoyed reading your fan fic. it's a guitly pleasure for me that i love to indulge in every once in a while, but i'm extremely picky and when i'm see something too long i look it over for a shorter ficlet. your story kept me enthralled and , from what i can tell, was written by someone who has talent and has spent much time refining that talent. it's got suspense, humor (very important), serious but not too much, and most importantly romance and lust. i must say that is the second thing i'm picky about; if the scene is too graphic (leaves nothing to imagination) it's just obscene, but your love scenes are just right. the plot takes turns which also very important, things hinted at in the beginning re-remerge later, you follow through. i hope to see what the next chapter holds in store and that you'll continue with this endevour.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found this story YEARS ago on fanfiction.net, back when Evo was still on the air (okay, so they're still technically playing an assorted, random bit of reruns on one of the 100 channels but that doesn't count) and simply loooooved it. These said reruns sparked my passion for Kitty/Kurt once again, and I somehow actually remembered this story and looked it up here. Yes, it's actually THAT good, that I would remember it throughout the years - me, who barely remembers what the hell she had for dinner last night. Actually, what DID I...never mind.
Anyway, the point I'm trying to reach here is - PLEASE UPDATE OR I MIGHT LITERALLY DIE! Really! Or I will at least be morbidly depressed. Sad, all for a piece of fanfiction, but it's the best Evo fic I've ever had the please of reading, if not at least in the top three pieces of fanfiction I've read, ever. I stopped reading "A Storm of Swords" to finish this. (a divine fantasy series, by the way, if you're into that) I could sit here and give a chapter-by-chapter analysis of what I love, and probably find a little bit of criticism (mostly a few minor typos, more prevalent in the latter chapters) but I'm too tired. I've stayed up well past my beddy bye time these last couple nights trying to catch up on what I've missed :) So...give me a holler if you need anything. Some sort of spark or inspiration to get you back in the mood to continue this (Gods know I need it for my own fanfiction), or a beta-reader, or...? Anything? C'mon, I'm a desperate woman here!
~ Much love and respect (and groveling), Kitty
Anyway, the point I'm trying to reach here is - PLEASE UPDATE OR I MIGHT LITERALLY DIE! Really! Or I will at least be morbidly depressed. Sad, all for a piece of fanfiction, but it's the best Evo fic I've ever had the please of reading, if not at least in the top three pieces of fanfiction I've read, ever. I stopped reading "A Storm of Swords" to finish this. (a divine fantasy series, by the way, if you're into that) I could sit here and give a chapter-by-chapter analysis of what I love, and probably find a little bit of criticism (mostly a few minor typos, more prevalent in the latter chapters) but I'm too tired. I've stayed up well past my beddy bye time these last couple nights trying to catch up on what I've missed :) So...give me a holler if you need anything. Some sort of spark or inspiration to get you back in the mood to continue this (Gods know I need it for my own fanfiction), or a beta-reader, or...? Anything? C'mon, I'm a desperate woman here!
~ Much love and respect (and groveling), Kitty
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm sorry; I forgot to leave my e-mail address in case you wished to contact me. It's SidhePanther@yahoo.com; if you'd like to get back to me to let me know what your status with this story is, that'd be greatly appreciated!
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding job! Please update this fic again when you have the chance, it would be such a shame to let this wonderful piece of writing go unfinished.
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it, 100 percent. Your characters are deep and complex and you truly bring them to life. Your writing is truly wonderful and I hope you plan on continuing, but if not, thank you for the wonderful read so far :)
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story.
It's so professional.
The beginning was a bit too slow, but I really liked it.
Please continue the story (I want to see Kurt's training, I hope he will be trained).
It's so professional.
The beginning was a bit too slow, but I really liked it.
Please continue the story (I want to see Kurt's training, I hope he will be trained).
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please! write more! I've been reading this non-stop for a while, and I neeeeeeeeed an ending!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just came back to check if you updated anything new to the masterpiece. The answer is unfortunately no... Darn. Anyways, I love how in character everyone is, and how.... tangible everyone's emotions are. Very realistic and it captures the reader's attention. I don't think you lost any skill in the couple years you weren't writing. Update soon, if only because you're in the "evil villians are being evil to the good guys who don't fucking NEED this crap" stage. And I'd like to get to the "good guys kick some ass as they use excessive amounts of explosives to show their appreciation of the hospitality shown to them thus far" stage.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is magnificent. I love Kurt x Kitty, and you have not failed to impress me. :) I can't wait to read the rest...
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is just getting better all the time. I can't wait for the next chapter!