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for Playing with Fire

by taekwondodo

person Nemain
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm still *loving* this story! And I just wanted to let you know re: your review that Kurtty is returning in ch. 40 onward! I promise! :)
person Adam Christensen
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the kind of review you wade through endless amounts of shitty one paragraph stories to see. An excellent work. I hope to seee more very soon. +++++
person Tergon
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Greetings and salutations, TKD!!!

Oh, yes. Oh, very much yes. I absolutely love this fic. Love, love, LOVE!
There's sort of the yes-and-no Kurtty going on, Logan's getting all concerned about Kurt and trying not to show it, the Anti-mutant propaganda is growing...
You have to write more. Understand me? You have to.
I will beg, if that's what you're going to reduce me to. I will do whatever I must to get yo fin finish posting this fic. Please, please, please, please...

I await more. Pleeeeeeeeez?

Yours hyperactively,
Tergon
With additional greetings from Selexor the singing platypus.
person Apteryx
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, especially the characterisations, and I like that it doesn't have a 'rushed' feel to it. Please continue! (No pressure though, 'cause I know *exactly* how hard it can be writing with kids running around:) ) Oh, and on the formatting - some versions of Word have an option under File> Save As HTML. Does yours have that? Very quick and easy :)
Cheers,
Apteryx
person Charmless
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
damn that is a good story although chapter 4 seems out of place at the moment. when are you putting up the next bit
person Nemain
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I like this a lot! Finally, someone else with Kurtty tendencies! :) More, please!
person flaMeS
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like where this story is going. i hope you get a chance to post future chapters soon. i like your view on the character's personalitys. ....however one spell's that word >,o... anyways, thumbs up and lots of candy and flowers for this one...
flaMeS
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meaGaN
person inuficcrzy
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. this sounds great! more of kurts past, masters is going all commando.

sounds like a lot of fun. i do have to say though, i'm a kurtty fan. maybe you could help him get with her? please?
person Maria
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Not only does it have a worthwhile emotional impact, it has naughty Kurbitsbits as well. It hard to find X Ev Kurrty stories that treat both of them as whole characters. That's why I was so dissapointed that you didn't intend for this to be a Kurrty. Is there anyway to petition you to change your mind?
person Anon Omus
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. The easiest way to fix your italics and bold letters would be to con the the whole thing to HTML. It's easier than it sounds. Just put a <pre> (that's
 if the review doesn't convert to HTML) at the begining and a </pre> (
)
at the end. To do italics, put a <I> () at the beginning and a </I> (
Oh, yeah, do this in notepad and make sure to save it as a *.htm file if you do it. Word really screws up HTML.