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aw, the end of the chapters so sweet. I've actually been reading this story since it was on ff.net, and only came to this site when i found out it was going to be here. didn't even know there was an adultff.net before then. interesting...i love the story though. You have a great writing style and are very good with detail ::cough:: sometimes too good ::cough:: and it flows very nicely. It's a nice little tasteful lemon, not a full blown out hardcore porno, but the kind that makes ya feel all warm and tingly inside and wish guys were really like that (tails and fur included as well as charm) and makes you just go 'awww'. hope you write more soon!

Hello TKD! I feel so bad! I'm a horrible fanfic friend! I just realized that I haven't reviewed once over here at AFF.net. Ah yes. Chapter 12. The chapter that I've been waiting for, breathless with anticipation. Ever since chapter one over at FF.net, I've been waiting for you to really cut loose and write something so beautiful. After reading this chapter, all I can say is bravo! Writing smut is easy. Pornography is made every day, and cheaply. Writing like this, erotica, I can't even begin to describe how difficult it is for the rest of us. Writers like you and Nemain make it look easy, but the minute that the rest of us try we find how difficult it really is. So I applaud how well you wrote the "love making" scene here. It was wonderful. The story itself? You already know how much I love it. Or at least, I hope you do. This story is so different from 99.9% of the fanfics posted on any website, and its uniqueness makes it great. I have no complaints as far as form goes. If you miss the spelling of a word here or forget a translation there, well...we're all human. It's easier for writers with editors to catch that stuff. So I wouldn't worry about it. Anyhow, in summation, I'm really glad that I got on your bandwagon so early over at FF.net, and even though I don't think that I've ever told you in an email or review, I'm honored that you liked some of my stories, and I hope to one day become as fantastic a writer as you are now.

Later,
Parker

First of all...*love* the title to chapter twelve. Second, Fanfreakingtastic description! I feel so inadequate now! This story is one of my favorites!

When I first read this chapter I wasn't quite sure that Kurt would be the type to drink, but after I read it you had me convinced. This chapter was hilarious, especially the interaction between Kurt and Logan. I also like the way you allow people to see the side of Logan that loves and is concerned for the Institue kids. A lot of people forget that about him. He may seem tough, but he cares for them all individually. Like in last weeks episode Ghost of a Chance where Kitty has her accident with her four wheeler. Logan saw the smoke and hauled ass down to where she was.Then he threw his motorcycle down (his pride and joy) just to make sure his Half-pint was alright. He does have a good side and you portray it wonderfully. Well done!

One word. Awww!!! That was so beautiful. I thought it was going to be great, but it was ten times better. I really like the way you managed to make a sex scene sensual, beautiful, and sexy without going into dirty smuess.ess. I love smut that has characters in love, I don't like it when the characters are invovled in animalistic lust. Love is beautiful and sex is supposed to be the same way. I thought it was cute when you had Kurt all worked up about hurting Kitty. That was great. I also like how when it was all said and done they both said that they loved each other, but neither of them were aware of it. Awesome. Keep up the good work!

That was so wonderful!! What a beautiful lemon, steamy, sexy and romantic! I love the kinky use of his tail, but I really hope you explain soon why he can't handle her touching it. I know it drives him too crazy, but I wanna know why! Anyway, keep it up, that was amazing. (They need to have a few more encounters, especially one when she grips his tail right in the middle of it! I'm dying to see what he'll do!)

Damn... is it hot in here or is that just chapter 12?!

I love you, you know that? This fic makes me all...*sigh* Soooooooooooooo good! I love the characterizations!

I like it. It's a little on the drawn out side, not not too much so. The German is pretty good, but it would be spelled and said "Komm hier!" since it's a command (I'm in Deutsch IV (German 4) now so *ner* lol). I can't wait for the next chapters to surface. You've got quite a good story unfolding. You get 2 gold stars by your name on the board!

Happy birthday and great story. Frankly, I'm a little too old be be reading explicit storys about underage characters taken from a Saturday morning cartoon and you're too old to be writing them....you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Deal?