rate_review Reviews

love your story keep it going i like where your taking it

goody goody gumdrops, another chapter. YAY!! Like I've said before, I LOVE the story. Very well written and just so sweet. Why can't real guys be that sweet and caring and fuzzy...in a not gross way. Cause let's face it, real life fuzzy guys just aren't, um, well it's just not attractive, unless you're into that sort of thing. Sigh.
oh well, can't wait for more. Hope you get another chapter out soon. ~JOY~

Is it just me or does it seem like the characters talk to themselves more than to eachother... oh well. Nothing wrong with that. Right? Right. I'm still loving your story and am especially liking the speedy-putting-up-of-chapters-ness. I never was one for writing a long review, so I'll just leave it at this: Keep up the good work!

p.s. I also liked that you gave Kurt an earring. Since he did grow up in a Gypsy camp it would be more than likely that he would have one. Atleast I think it would be.

Make your month? I live to serve. *Grin & wink*

And if you really believe that, there's this bridge in
Brooklyn that I can sell ya... *snort*

Hey, I liked the internal dialogue. Getting into people's
heads is what I -DO-. Tho I wouldn't mind it too much
if I could see what actually -happens- next. If that isn't
too much to ask, or demand. Whichever.

To the point: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE........ please.

Ja Ne,
CybrEm

Update soon pLease

well i must say this seems to be shaping up quite nicely. kurt and kitty are my favourite x-men in whatever form you choose, either the movies, the comics (all universes included) and the cartoons. you've managed to give them a few nice twists. the way this is shaping up with the mysterious organization wanting kurt makes me think this will be a lon long story and i find myself wanting to read the whole thing. it's going to rough waiting for each chapter. what i find myself craving more is eve everyone will react to kitty and kurt's new relationship. can't wait to see what happens.

What can I say... I've really, REALLY, enjoyed reading this story, so much so that I stayed up until 1.15AM reading all 13 chapters, even though I know that my alarm clock will be going off at 5.45AM tomorrow morning so I can go to work. Totally addictive, please tell me that there is more... *sigh* now I really, REALLY, gotta go to bed, sweet Morpheous calls, (did I spell that right), *yawns* so sleepy, I shall no doubt have very sweetams ams tonight...

I LOVE this fic. And I adore you for creating it. I'm going to build you
a beautiful frescoed shrine next to the altar I made for Nemain.
(With copies of various favorite fics and scenes inside)

By the bye, if anyone tries to outright flame you, send them to me so I
can either beat some sense into them or rip them a new one. Whichever
I'm in the mood for at the time. *smiling with an innocent expression*
(looks can be so decieving, can't they? *giggle*

Anyways, more please!! I can beg if you want. All you have to do is ask,
or wait for the mood (or impatience) to strike.

Thanks bunches,
CybrEmly01

wonderful! that's all i can say!

I thought that this was well written, though the Kurt self-torture stuff is starting to get a bit redundant. And when are you going to make the commandos do something other than steam? Also a bit more Kitty development would be good. I just feel that her character is a lot more hollow that Kurt's.

Thanks and I hope that this was helpful.