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That was incredible. I just finished reading all 16 chapters, straight. That was by far, the greatest fanfic of this type that I've ever read... it actually has a plot, jokes, and isn't all about sex! I give it 6 out of 5 stars! That's right, 6 out of 5! Keep up the excellent work!

Wow. Okay, I got the mindless mindful praise out of the way, so now to say it in coherent terms. The type that people seem not to be able to muster after reading a good story. This story is wonderful, you, madame, write like a profesional. Even those chapaters you said were "chopy" flowed well. I also loved your use of character background, espcially for Kurt. (*heheh* being Catholic myself I can certianly understand his perspective on things. But I am wondering why a small ch woh would hold latin services, masses haven't been in latin since the 60s and I think only large churchs offer them. . .but I could be wrong, I wish *my* church offered latin mass. *grumbles*)

Okay, back on track, you managed to write a sensual story without being vulgar, not many people pull that off well, if at all. I really think you should consider going professional, I skim through most of the stories on this site, but for the past few days I've actaully READ yours. I loo looked forward to it daily. I also find humor in your disclaimers. ^_~

There are a few things that bother me though, first of all, formating, but that's not your fault. Since you blame Word, I will too. BAD WORD, BAD! FORMAT STORIES! Okay, now the program has been blamed and we are all happy. Also, you fixed this in later chapters but your early chapters had no english to german glossary. I'm glad you added it in later, since I speak no german other than "Ich bein ein berliner" which I think means "I am a cream filled pastry" But I could be wrong. Any way, the glossaries you added fixed that problem, so that's not a big deal either. Other than that there's only a couple of proofing issues. Mainly one sentance (I think Evan was talking) that youd didn't close the quotes. But that's just nitpicking.

Any way, really awesome story, I can\ait ait to see where this is going to go, and I'm tempted to pay you for a hard copy. *evil grin* Oh yes, that would be good. Keep up the awesome work!

Sephira jo

I read this on FF.net. I wish I had read this version first but I like to re-read stories so that didn't bother me. Great sex scenes. I wouldn't call it smut because you put so much emotion on the characters that isn't not smutty. I just can't stop complimenting you. P.S I think maybe I kidnapped your muse. After reading your story I had the best ideas. I'll post it maybe or I'd probalbly e-mail it to you directly if you wounldn't mind. I really love the way wri write with all the internall termoil of emotions bubbleing over. It's just Angst-rific. If you are able to read this review and responde I would really like to send a story to you personaly. Only because I'm new to fan ficton writeing and I'm really nervous about critisium. I mean realy nervous. I wrote a short essay of Kurt/Amanda and I allmost had a pain attack letting my friend read it, who is also a big X-men:EVO fan. Reading your bio made me a lot more confident that I'm not the only one so why worry. Still the apprehension grows. Please contiue your story at your own pass. I love the forshadowing. Okay, till your next chapter.

i know i've probably reviewed be, bu, but i just love this story and i just wantd to let you know that. i hope that you will update it soon. it's very dark and i can't wait to see where it's going.
Meagan

confrontations was the the best chapter yet. I actually had to take more than a moment to get over my excitment and calm myself.

Extremely entertaining as usual, and as far as 'Edna' is concerned, I like it, it's my Nan's name, and is of Welsh origin in case you were wondering.

I'm psyched that you've updated! Yay! I hope someone can get to the bottom(no pun intended) of Kurt's "tail" issue.

I'm so loving this fic! It was very inspirational. Please continue it.

Ooh, two more new chapters for me to drool over since I last perused this story, excellently written, and extremely enjoyable to read as always, I shall look forward to the next installment, and if I forgot to review last time, my apologies.

love Kara (aka)

Lady Flame
HOT by name, HOT by na Lad

This story is awesome, i can't wait till your next chapter, i hope it's coming soon, i'll be checking it out