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for The Dangers of Mallowmars

by aranel

person JexyBaby
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know its kinda pathetic, but you really had me going there – I didn’t realise it was a dream until the *THUD*. I mean, I obviously knew that something wasn’t right, but it was just so ~real~ with the rest of the brotherhood present… You are such an awesome writer and you have such creative ideas! Please update something soon! Anything!easeease!
person WinkyBells
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the sexiest fics I've ever read! I'm such a fan of the whole 1940's speakeasy lounge acts! So very classic and subtly seductive. But the best part was when he fell off the couch. *chuckles* That sorta thing's happened to me before... Keep up the great work, and maybe a sequel is in order?? *big puppy dog eyes*
person An innocent Bystander
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw man it woud've been way funny if he really had fainted when the *thud* came up... Loved it...Bye for now!
person foof 76
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was really well written! Although I have to admit, I was dying for a lemon, but the teasing is wonderful. Keep up the good work.