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nice story.I like nightcrawler the way you presentes him. I hope you don`t kill me when I say that nightcrawler makes many mistakes when he speaks German. yeah i know my english is terrible, I just wanted to point this out

Well, I hope you finish this. I hate to be left with a story full of horrendously stupid and slimy people.

I didn't catch when you updated last, but I think that you might need a bit more of a resolution to this. This is Marie's story, but the thing with Kurt seems to be hanging. Marie's part could stand another knot in the tie-off as well. I don't understand why Rouge didn't turn on her powers at the onset, other than the rest of the story wouldn't have happened. Your part about why she didn't reveal the truth sooner makes sense. I like this one. It also reminds me a little of a project I'm working on, so it was lucky to stumble across it.

One really bad thing that you should watch out for. During the medical room scene, I was hearing your voice. The author should endevor to be invisible during the middle of the story. It wasn't so bad as some who sound like gossiping with friends, but it was distracting.

Very well written. Kurt is quite ooc, especialy since it's movieverse Kurt who is more introverted and religious. Still, it's a unique take on the character. I have some problems with Marie being so helpless, but I'll deal.

This is a very interesting fic and the last bit with Logan and Marie is really cute ^_^ I like very much keep writing you are doing a great job!

Wow, that was really moving. Very good. Non-con is usually a thing I try to avoid in stories, but you've written this really beautifully. One small critism, you kept changing tenses in the last chapter. Try to avoid this if possible, because it may throw a reader off.

Yes, this is very OOC for Kurt, but you've given a reason for his actions which is great because then we can understand him more.

PLEASE update soon!!

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Great story and writing...I hate to see Kurt as the bad guy since he's my favorite, but I still like it. Add more!

Buahaha. Perfect - although I think Logan's a bit OOC with all the "honey"s and "sweetheart"s going down. Fantabulous job, update soon!

okay... i hope you can get one out soon... i really love this fic... and as far as that ass who keeps reviewing... he writes that on everyones fics... anyways keep up the good work.

Bah. I've been reading this story since the beginning and have JUST NOW reviewed, and for that I am sorry. And all I have to say is . . . bah. But in a good way, as it's an EXTREMELY interesting fanfiction, apparently with an extremely interesting author. Thanks for the note, I was beginning to wonder if you really HAD fallen off the face of the earth, or something equally impossible. The information was good to know. And I'll look forward to an update . . . just like I do every other day of the week. Keep writing, you're doing a fantastic job.

~Gabby