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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I love your fic, and that I have to agree with you on Marie's taste in music. About the Queen of the Damned movie though, wouldn't Akasha be black anyway, as Egyptians were africans six thousand years ago? Also, Armand looked like Lestat should have, while Lestat looked like Armard ought to have. The book though is fantastic, and the music for Queen was great, though they got so much wrong and left so much out i was yelling at the screen. thanks again for writing this, and keep up the good work.
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rewrites gotta love them it keeps getting better and better cant wait to see the next chap. :0
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, its still good. The revisions help an already good story.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is frickin awsome. it's cool that you you dig queen of the damned by anne rice too, but i have a question. isn't egypt in africa? so why wouldn't akasha be a black chick? i'm 100% egyptian and i'm darker than akasha. just something to think about.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's a good Point Car. But from what I remb from the book she wasn't African in apperance*i know i spelt that wrong lol*. As for what you said from what I can remb. The actual race of Egyptians that lived in her time were a different race of people than those that live there now. :) I may be wrong though
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude every time i read your stories they keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work! :) I look forward to seeing more in the future,
P.S. More Leagacy of Kain abilities and action!
"My path is forever strewn with corpses...VAE VICTUS!!!"
P.S. More Leagacy of Kain abilities and action!
"My path is forever strewn with corpses...VAE VICTUS!!!"
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok Wolf I finally got through it all! 37 Chapters in 2 days of good reading. Well I have to say you were absolutely right, It just kept getting better and better. The story has a good solid plot, the characters progress and develope throughout their struggles, the fighre gre good. OMG you got Logan just dead on man, That has to be the best I have seen Logan used in a Fan Fic yet. Even through all the action, romance, and story I couldn't help stopping at certain points and laughing.
It is a rarory ory that can contain so many emotions and flow so well, the descriptions the attitudes, all paint the picture in my mind. I have to say Excellent Work, and KEEP IT UP OR IM COMING AFTER YOU WITH MY SILVER MACE!!!! :)
And we both dont want that, You have me hooked; don't leave an addict hangin.
A few little issues but they pale in comparison with what you have done so far... I noticed on the Chapters where you broke one chapter into 2 peices that you left your usual anecdotal footnotes off (no big deal but i was awaiting another possible humorous thing to read); The grammar and spelling have improved well, keep up the improvement (I know it is hard, you have seen how I type); and other than that this has to be one of the best Xmen Evo fics I have ever read, if not THE best.
So I salute you in the Words of the Man himself - HAIL TO THE KING BABY!!!
-Shadrach
It is a rarory ory that can contain so many emotions and flow so well, the descriptions the attitudes, all paint the picture in my mind. I have to say Excellent Work, and KEEP IT UP OR IM COMING AFTER YOU WITH MY SILVER MACE!!!! :)
And we both dont want that, You have me hooked; don't leave an addict hangin.
A few little issues but they pale in comparison with what you have done so far... I noticed on the Chapters where you broke one chapter into 2 peices that you left your usual anecdotal footnotes off (no big deal but i was awaiting another possible humorous thing to read); The grammar and spelling have improved well, keep up the improvement (I know it is hard, you have seen how I type); and other than that this has to be one of the best Xmen Evo fics I have ever read, if not THE best.
So I salute you in the Words of the Man himself - HAIL TO THE KING BABY!!!
-Shadrach
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, working on it
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE finish this man, it needs it.
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible