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Great story so far although your OC went through a lot of changes I hope you finally figured out what to stay with. When are you going to finish this though? I'm anxiously awaiting that and also any sequels. If you got the time take a look at my stuff, I would like your opinoin on them.

that was the best story that I have ever read concerning the X-men. Even better than the original comics and the cartoon

Man I was wondering when you were getting back to this, I take it your cleaning up the chatpers now huh? Well since it's hard to tell exactly how strong your OC is he might be strong enough, but would that cancelation power of his work on non-mutants and/or mutant with altered DNA? Personally I think it would be intersting that in a future fic it turns out that he can't I mean that makes defeating other mutants too easy and if guys like Juggernaut, Omega Red and Apocalypse can't be effected then that would add more drama to the fights against characters like that and like I said those guys being defeated so easily is just wrong.

Although I still think you're making Tabitha into a slut in this I mean what kind of girl goes after the first guy she wants and wants to fuck him as soon as possible? I remember you told me that wasn't your intention but that's how it looks like with how you wrote you, if you still don't want her to come off like that in the sequel (which I am dying ot read along with the final chapter) you might want to be a bit more careful with how you write her in that then.

anyways I guess your busy considering how long it takes for an update but I can wait...I think, well I hope.

oh and since he's from another universe I'm surprised he hasn't helped Xavier make a list of all the mutants he knows about and the kind of problems they might cause in that world. I mean if I ended up there I owuld want to give him heads up on a few things (minus Onslaught just in case) like the Hellfire Club, The Brood, The Legacy Virus...even if they didn't show up it would be better to be prepared for it.

Plus I would try and see if other Marvel characters exist like try to see if there's a certain Peter Parker, Matt Murdoc and such in New York. Plus being like Galactus...I mean if the X-Men exist then what if others exist too? I hope in the sequel his mind wonders in a chapter and then he comes to that realization and freaks out a bit. I mean I would to if certain characters existed also. Plus then he would also know that aliens exists too and can name them.

well anyways, nice fic and I really want to read the end of this and the next one. OH and thaks for that image you sent me I got a deviant gallery you might find interesting at (http://agent-g.deviantart.com/) this is one of my best, it's of Rogue (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15200613/)

Glad to see you back, and as usual another good chapter. Keep up the good work

Sorry to all the fans of this fic for going AWOl for a Year or two. but my life has been rather..strange as of late. I am now depressed enough though to get back into my wirting. I won't be turning out stuff as fast as I used to and It might not be as good as before but please forgive me..It's been a while since I dived into the minds of these characters for my fun and yours.

ok lets put it this way i need this story and you are standing between me and it u dont want to be there so update

UPDATE PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ya know there ARE some of us who want you to finish your damn story!!!! I love this fic. It's somthing I can read over and over again, (and I have) so do us(me in particular) a favor and FINISH IT PLEASE!!!!!

Cheers!!

who ever can just return the story do it give back ownership or u can have all these fans get really pissed and thats never a good thing ok? ok!





MATTHEW RULES!!!!!!!!

Like I said before I cannot Update or do anything for that matter with this story untill ownership is returned to me. When that happens I will add the last chapter. Along with the rewrites and polish it needs