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for Do I Love Him Back?

by Hyperdrive85

person Wicked Bitch of the West
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yo, me again. I reviewed your other X-Men: Evo story and I gotta say that this sequel is nothing short of the shit. I thought it was really good and I hope you write more. It's is kinda lacking homey and you need to write more, say what happens next. I dunno it could be some '1 year' later type shit. So writing more would be very cool and you can be sure I'd read it.
Oh yeah something else? Do you have a website? That ghetto link you got on your profile, sux ass and doesn't work. So if you got a new one or something, post that bad boy. So yeah, rub a dub dub, write more or you're a scrub. Peace!
person joey
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you need to do another little spell check on it Treky, and give it another read though in a day or two. there are a few things that just sound really weird. but other then that it's good. still needs more Bobby though ^_^
person specialphreak
schedule January 3, 0000 at 12:00 AM
I think its great!
Please keep the story going!!!!
Specialphreak~