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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
4 simple words.. You *NEED* to Continue. No one should be allowed to let that cliffy stay unattended like that. I love your writing style and hope that this story gets finished or continued (the latter _please_)
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't sound finished. You should continute it.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh Update!! Update!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Vic/Ro stories and good ones are hard to find. You know, not the ones that are just about sex, but those ones that actually have a plot line. Yours was very good. I hope that you write a new chapter soon.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do asequel to this. This was a kick a** story...I hope to read more.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just came across this story and I'm totally hooked. I sincerely hope there's more to this and it's not a one shot! Kickass story.
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Bloody excellent. I am _drooling_ for an update here.
It just has everything: good writing, Victor and Ororo perfectly in character, very very sexy, adds suprising and erotic twists to the movie... and the song is beautiful and melts into the fic perfectly. With most songfics there is an imbalance between story and song: The song is better than the fiction so that the story seems to tagg along, or the song tells to much on its own or whatever... but here story and song fit seamlessly and improve each other.
For the love of good fanfiction: update this. I don't care if you have to scramthe the complete cannon as long as the two of them end up with each other.
**gibbers hopefully**
It just has everything: good writing, Victor and Ororo perfectly in character, very very sexy, adds suprising and erotic twists to the movie... and the song is beautiful and melts into the fic perfectly. With most songfics there is an imbalance between story and song: The song is better than the fiction so that the story seems to tagg along, or the song tells to much on its own or whatever... but here story and song fit seamlessly and improve each other.
For the love of good fanfiction: update this. I don't care if you have to scramthe the complete cannon as long as the two of them end up with each other.
**gibbers hopefully**
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May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a great story. I can't wait until you write the next part. Don't leave us hanging!
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update-update-update. please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this softer side of Victor. It may not exist ,as the character was originally intended to be rather cruel, but I think you did a wonderful job! Plaese write more!