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Whoops, something went wrong with my previous review.

Anyways, you reviewed my story, so it's only fair if I'm reviewing yours! I didn't know you had one up, but I'm glad I found it. Don't we all love Scott/Logan stories? But I have to agree with the other readers, we need LEMON! Lol, I don't know if anybody offered to help you, but if you want, I would love to help you out. You know my story, so if you like the style, mail me at nickboyle@hotmail.com.

ANyways, my only advice to you, is to be more sure about yourself, your story doesn't suck at all. Don't be afraid to write, because how else are you going to improve your skills? And don't worry about the long chapters, just because others do it, doesn't mean you have to.
If you want them to be longer, you should try to write a bit more descriptive. Like what the characters are thinking, seeing, experiencing. You tend to write from your view, which isn't bad at all, but try to get more into the character's skin. Good luck and I hope that helps!

Huggles Lucy

The obvious use of the title actually didn't make it that horrible. It reminded me of how much my fics always stray from their plot, not that they even have one... Plots are good. And so are longer chapters, but it doesn't matter if your chapters are one page or eight pages: it will always remain as gras eas ever. Although, it would be nicer if it was just a bit longer... Cliffhangers can be a bit nasty sometimes.

I like this story... I really do... I wish you could make the chapters a little bit longer, though... Just a suggestion. Perhaps you should write one thorough longer chapter, instead of posting short chapters in a hurry. But like I said, just a suggestion...

Best fic ever! Lots of scott/Logan goodness and slight Jean bashing. Perfect! but..needs a lemon for S/L! Please write more really soon!

P.S I read your other fic. Its really good. I'll review proper when I can.

P.P.S Not off topic, James Marsden is definetly the finest thing ever! MMMMMMMMMM.........................
Shaz.RWD>

Good story!!
but.....YOU ARE KILLING ME!!
It's too short!
give me more please~~please~~
I do want to know what will happpen next!

You are right! Scott/Logan are one of the best. :) lol, please update soon, eh? ^^ this is excellent

Ack! Don't leave it there! This was a great start. Poor Scott. Jean is a little to controling isn' she? I lforwforward to the next chapter.

Please don't leave it there! I think this could become a really good story, so please update.

awesome story!!
please don't stop here.
I do want to know what will happen in next chaper.

You can't just leave it there!?!?!!? Please Continue!!!!!