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i've laughed at fics before-have almost fell off chairs-but MAN MEAT! holy shit, hilarious!!!!!!!!!!............keep updating

I knew she wouldn't believe him... oh, well, guess she'll have to find out the hard way...

Another hot chapter!

OMG! That is quite possibly the hottest thing I've ever read in my life... and wonderfully written and so in character for Logan (at least how he is in my mind). Incredible!

Hot and strong and some great ideas. Slight weakness which will probably disappear with beta-ing: Why would Logan need a hang-over cure? (Like, healing abilities?)

Hot, hot, hot!!!!!!!! It's interesting how "poor" Scott fares so badly in these fics by being so very whitebread vanilla in sex. His loss, our gain. This is great, but PLEASE get to the payoAnd And one wonders if 'ol Charlie arranged this mission to solve the tension that has been building. Just a nasty voyeristic thought. He can't be totally oblivious to the interpersonal dynamics of the "team". Anyhow, I look forward to Logan and Jeannie finally getting it on and having a whole lot of fun.

... and this time the action was Logan/his moral inhibitations. If you aim at me biting my keyboard in frustration you're getting close.
I liked the secondf a f a lot, but I thought that the first half contained some incongruencies: In the movie X-men Jean had little trouble reading Logan, and... both Logan and Jean are sometimes cruder than I imagine them from the movies and the few comics I rea.g. .g. Logan grabbing his balls in chapter 3, Jean bitching at the blonde at the bar). Admittedly, could be sexual frustration.
But truly, I liked Logan's hesitation... and I'm on my toes for the next chapter.

.... wow. Man do you have your characters pinned down. I have never seen such a perfect mix of sexy/cocky/lovestruck logan. Beautiful. You sure can write, girl.. It's great to see such a fresh take on the same pairing. I await your next chapter eagerly. I'd love to be on your fic-mailing list if you have one :) Keep up the good read-candy, for the redshippers' sakes, please!

Here I goverivering for an update and then the action is Logan/Miss Palm. Gggg. Ah well, I'll entertain myself with what Logan would have looked if Jean had been cool enough to simply counter that "You ought to thank me" with "I guess you are right. Thank you. Happy now?"
And it's IC and the writing is great, yet still... I feel thwarted.

Whoa. Smoking red hot. I`m pretty speachless, but that doesn`t stop me from begging for updates. Plenty of updates. Pretty Please.

very good!!!