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August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
<3!!!!
Can't get enough of it !! 10-8-2015 ...I'm still hoping u're gonna come back finish it !
Can't get enough of it !! 10-8-2015 ...I'm still hoping u're gonna come back finish it !
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August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fucking love it!!!
10-8-2015 I'm still hoping u'll gonna come back and finish it.
10-8-2015 I'm still hoping u'll gonna come back and finish it.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a story. I am a writer myself, i haven't tryed my hand on Fan Fiction before but i suppose i had my share of it after 8 years of MArvel RP. Well i just wanted to let you know it was great, and i am looking forward to more chapters from it. Hopefully Jean will find out that Scott is cheating on her( snickers...) But then again that is just my evil side.
If you could, please e-mail me when you post a new chapter from this, i really want to read it.
Keep up the great work
Storm
If you could, please e-mail me when you post a new chapter from this, i really want to read it.
Keep up the great work
Storm
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man you do know how to write a mean story!! I do so hope that you will continue with this story and explain what Logan is talking about.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't wait for some update. Do you intend to continue?
Nath
Nath
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I'm a huge redshipper fan and this story was really good.
I can't wait for it to be continued!
I can't wait for it to be continued!
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must finish for the love of all humanity you must finish this. I hate Jean but this story fit right, please finish!!!!!
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please...as soon as possible
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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six. You never told me you were continuing this!! I love it honey, I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Logan, I believe him Scott was acting too wierd about sex. But when will Jean realize that Logan loves her?
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay. _Good_ chapter.
I like the conflict in Logan wether or not to tell Jean about Cyclops having something with another woman - it brought enough plot into the chapter. Not that I'd complain about the PWP content.
Some of the decriptions... o.k., I read way to much fan fiction, so I read a lot of the descriptions before. "He was a man possessed", "never felt anything so powerful in her life before"... I'm warry of superlatives, which is probably an after-effect of too many MS.
As always, looking forward to the next chapter, especially the development Scooter-Jean - I mean, Scooter, cheating? Given his vanilla nice guy image that comes as a suprise. Or was Logan reading to much into what he smelled?
I like the conflict in Logan wether or not to tell Jean about Cyclops having something with another woman - it brought enough plot into the chapter. Not that I'd complain about the PWP content.
Some of the decriptions... o.k., I read way to much fan fiction, so I read a lot of the descriptions before. "He was a man possessed", "never felt anything so powerful in her life before"... I'm warry of superlatives, which is probably an after-effect of too many MS.
As always, looking forward to the next chapter, especially the development Scooter-Jean - I mean, Scooter, cheating? Given his vanilla nice guy image that comes as a suprise. Or was Logan reading to much into what he smelled?