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Wow, this is the best story EVER !!! I love the Kurt/Kitty pairing, and its really sweet how they care about each other so much. Please keep writing !!!!

Hey, this story took me a couple of days to get through and I have to say I LOVE IT. Although you were a bit harsh on them...

Wow

A most amazing story. I believe you are my favorite fanfiction writier. Your writings amazing. and the little footnotes at the end of the chapters really help. Keep up the great work. I'll be watching your work closely.

Well, this story was magnificent. Your style of writing and creativity are incredible. You also manage to incorporate and maintain multiple plot lines within a story, which is a difficult task and rarely accomplished well. I cannot say enough good things about this story. I am disappointed more of our fellow writers/readers have not reviewed it, this story is worthy of the highest praise.

I loved the story, so far I'm only on chap 10, but I plan to keep on reading. This story's grabbed my interest. I've read some other of Nemain's stories, all wonderful. My favorite author by far on ff.net--Amazing

OMG!!! What an awesome story! I've been reading it on and off at work for a week! I loved it!

I actually found this after reading the first chapter of heatwave. The unusal pairings sent me to this story to catch up. I'm glad I did, very entertaining story. Looking forward to Shiva.

Hey, just thought I'd let you know I enjoyed this story. Very well-written and strong sense of style. I think you did a good job of characterizing, and despite all the drama it wasn't an overload and you avoided being cliche or cheesy. I do have a question though. Wouldn't the solution to the lawsuit, Kitty's name issue, also nullify the paperwork that signed her over to Logan's care? Wouldn't it havso uso used the wrong name just as the lawsuit did? Just a detail that really isn't that significant (then again, I haven't read the sequels yet) but that I thought I'd note. Anyway, once again: good job! =)

Okay Doke, where to begin? I'll start with boy was that long, and in depth, and filled with so many intricate and interwining plots and subplots that at some points my brain nearly frizzled out completely (though that isnt hard). And i've only gotten through part one of what looo hoo hopefully be the never ending saga. To tell you the truth, i liked that. I'm not into romance, in fact the mere notion of it has made me flee screaming from fics before but i made an exception cause i figured this is like one of the founding stones of XME fanfiction and i'm pretty glad i did. I loved the attention to detail, I am walking away with one hell of a lotta interesting facts i never knew before, which is always a plus. Shows that 1. you like to give your stories detail and 2. you're on your way to becoming a frickin good writer since you're willing to go and research that stuffif yif you already knew this stuff at least you're bothering to include it. Little things like that are touches I like. The main plot of Kitty and Kurt's illfated love was a good one, both characters stayed very true to themselves especially dear Kurt, and my only qualm about their storyline was that you layed on a the judaism theme a little hard. Interesting stuff yes, but maybe you could break it down a little and let it just flow in. No need to have it in chunky style pieces. I think that was my only qualm about the entire story, the rest was excellent. My main love of this story has to be the fact you paid attention to the other characters. This was an all rounder fic, that covered many different aspects and many different characters and just when one part was becoming slightly tideous (not boring just ya know, you wanted to take a break for a moment) there was another character and subplot to take its place. A very hard thing to attempt and a deadly thing to achieve, but you seem to have mastered it nicely. The plots could exist by themselves, but the way that they relied on each other made this fic even more of a gem to read, the story just flowed along with no nasty plotholes or strange jumps in the story telling. Now for writing style, you're a pretty funny writer. The serious bits are good, but i like the way there is always a least one or two little lines that make me spurt milk out my nose and I think i'm going to be quoting a lot of the lines from this fic for the next few days. Ok that was a lot longer than i intended, but i figured you deserved it since you've kept me entertained for roughly a day and a half while i read this. I'm gonna go now and read Shiva, and stop wasting your time.
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