rate_review Reviews

Soooooooo cooooooool! :D

this was a cute, hot little scene. very well written, but that's nothing new. what is new is that this doesn't seem to coincide with your 'forever' series. of course, you're so annoying that you come out with so many different chapters or stories each week. i have no idea how you do it. i can barely write for five minutes at a time, which makes it very hard to produce anything. i guess that's off topic though. i hope you continue this. male fantasy and all, i like seeing two sweet little things having fun. i know i'm a perv. hehe.

Hmm, I liked this story, though I did find that everything seemed to speed up at the end, which spoiled the story a bit, but not too much.

Good work...let's hope for another, eh?