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for Inner Conflicts

by Nightbloom

person TKD
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am officially more intensely disturbed than I have been at any point during this fic. Poor Kurt. Talk about everyone saying/doing the wrong thing at the wrong time or in the wrong way. He felt so atedated and trapped and now he's actually bought into Lance's emotional perversion. I am now beginning to doubt the possibility of any kind of happy ending. Even if things get straightened out in the end, there has been so much profound emotional damage done to the Elf that there's is no way he can come out of this w/o some intense scarring. Makes me want to cry for him.
person Araki
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Continue soon~ My hoped it comes soon. Please continue
person Dragon Slayer
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! that was great Please contiune I really want to know what happens next. oh please please contiune. oh oh oh oh maybe have it turn out to be a ScottxKurt thingy oh oh oh please contiune all these idea's about what could or might happen is driving me crazy.
person Jander
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are doing an excellent job of this story!! I can feel Kurt's helplessness and confusion! You do a very good job of conveying the characters' feelings. Please keep it up!! I cannot wait until the next chapter(s?).
person Dragon Slayer
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really really really love this story please contiune I want to know what happens next? More sex seanse(bad spelling I know)? Will Boom Boom help out rat on Lance to the "X-geeks\s Mys Mystice going to show up and get really pissed of at Lance? Will Scott get Kurt back? Is Xavier going to force himself to read Kurt's mind so he understands whats going on? Is Lance going to get his ass kicked by everyone? OH I really really want to know.
person veejay
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey ppl! ive beeeeeen desperate to read the rest of this story n i wanted to email ththorthor n it has her site n its got the ret of teh story there!!! man the ending is sooooooooooooo good!!! i usually hate scott but he's won me over!! oh man so has tabitha! okay im shutting up now.. here's teh rest of teh story at:



http://www.kaltheinya.com/underground/maslai.html



GO TO IT NOW!!!!!!
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story to death! This is seriously one of the most interesting and well written fics I've ever read. Angst all the way, baby!!! I'd really love to read more n.n I wonder what Lance is in for from the other X-men ^_________^ Please post the next chapter soon! And thanks for writing this n.n It kept me busy for a couple nights =^.^=
person TKD
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Evil, bad, psycho Lance. Kill him now. Poor little fuzzy elf. And I thought I was into elf torture
person amy
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shit is right....awww poor Kurt. I really hope things get better for him, it's breaking my heart that he's hurting right now. At first I was thinking Lance wouldn't push things too far, maybe even really start to care for him...but now I want him to get what's coming to him, hard and painful. I don't think that sounded right. Okay, to the reason of my review: Wonderfic, ic, you must continue.
person virg
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
just wana keep this short so im gona sae i loooooooooooooveeeeee this fic n i hope u finish it SOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!! *sob* poor kurt!!