Excellent. Most excellent. Once again, you've spun quite the web here, using the sex scenes in this chapter to explore and develop Cindy's character, and the fight scenes with Morlun and Ezekiel aren't too bad, either, in that regard. Looking forward to seeing Peter and Cindy's plan with Mary Jane pay off, and speaking of MJ, was Peter meeting her the twist that threw that big monkey wrench into Ezekiel's plans? If so . . . I guess fate has nothing on a fiery redhead.
Interesting chapter
Interesting story
That was a great opening chapter, and the makings of an epic plot. Ezekiel was always shady in the comics, but making him a downright villain like here . . . well, I can roll with that, given what he was setting Peter up for before he died. Looking forward to seeing how Peter, MJ, and Cindy take him down together, and speaking of going down together, I rather liked the sex scene between Peter and Cindy. Spider-powered sex for the win, though I am eager to see how Peter expresses his gratitude to Mary Jane for her understanding and compassion, and I'm sure you know what I mean by that. All in all, keep up the excellent work with these stories, and I'll be awaiting the next chapter.