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for Spoils of War

by razzaname

person Oric13
schedule February 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 4: I'd been waiting for more Jane/Darcy smut. Good stuff! Thanks for writing more of this.

person Oric13
schedule January 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Happily surprised to see another chapter of this twisted tale.

This one seemed a bit more rushed and could've used a bit of editing, but still lot of fun and quite arousing.

Thanks for writing more.

person Oric13
schedule December 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Valkyrie throughly humiliated and bitch-tamed by Hela made for a great 2nd chapter, and it all fitted perfectly with the first chapter. Excellent work.

Looking forward to more of this.

schedule December 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Some interesting ideas, although can I cast a vote that Thor and the Hulk (not that bothered about Loki) are able to come back and turn the tables so that Hela becomes the slave in this dynamic later?

After all, the comics have established that the Hulk can survive in space to some degree, and Thor's been shown coping without an atmosphere in situations such as his battles with Ego, so it wouldn't be impossible to assume that they can gather their powers and mount a new attack on Hela in the future...

person Oric13
schedule November 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Very good story. And as a Kat Dennings fan I like that you included Darcy.

The Hera harem theme has potential for a sequel, like who else is she gonna add and perhaps some kinky shows her sex slaves put on with new members.

schedule November 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Damn good story. Feels so in character for Darcy. Hope you continue this. I can't help but wonder what other spoils Hela won. Sif? Valkyrie? other heroes? Aliens?