Any chance of update?
Wow, this is great, don't know of any other Hela stories but this is the I think the hotest thing I've ever read. And I think the only that could make Hela take a cock in her ass and take her anal cherry is the Black Widow. Please do more.Any idea when the next chapter will be posted?
Just saw an advanced screening of Captain Marvel. Would LOVE to see Captain Marvel get her ass and pussy fisted at the same time in your next chapter. Her asshole at bare minimum needs a good fisting. Other suggestions: Daisy from SHIELD, Niko and Karolina from Runaways, MJ and Betty from Spider-Man. That one could be fun to do in a few months, Hela: Far from Home.
Damn, it's always nice to see this update :) Another great chapter
I can't tell you how excited I am for the ineitable chapter coming up where Captain Marvel gets her holes positively devestated. Brie Larson is such a bombshell. E-mail me if you ever want help with a story or want someone to bounce ideas off of. Naughtynittany84@gmail.com.
I had to make an account just to share my appreciation for this story :D
It's just ALL SO GOOD. Hela is perfectly written...a terrifying strong older woman is what's up. She talks like how how movie Hela would talk, for sure.I want there to be more!
The only thing I've noticed is that she hasn't kissed anyone or went down on anyone....
After all this fucking it would be nice if she got close to someone. Also when you describe the setting and the positioning I think it really shines, like the first chapter and chapter 8. (I mean not saying you don't sometimes it's more noticeable than other times is all)
I hope you write more but thanks for this :)
Chapter 8 was another brilliant addition to this story, and maybe even my favourite. Just as I was getting ready to type you should include Sharon Carter, you did within the chapter with Peggy and actually had them interacting, which makes this a 10 out of 10 in my book. I especially like Sharon being given to Peggy as a gift, and of course both Carters being anally taken with such wonderful dirty talk thrown in.
I really hope you follow up on Sharon being Peggy's bitch, ideally with the likes of Maria Hill or Daisy Johnson seeing their hero passionately butt fuck her own niece, before begging Hela to take her ass.
Wow, amazing work. Exactly the kind of thing I like, and it's written so incredibly well.
I especially liked the chapter with Valkyrie. I mean, all the chapters are great, but their back story and the setting allowed Valkyrie's breaking o be extra humiliating, and you were particularly on point with the verbal abuse I love so much in that chapter.
Also love the fact that you sort of got Darcy and Jane together, because I ship them so much. On that note, you could have Maria Hill secretly being Natasha Romanoff's girlfriend, and Hela using that against her while conquering the highest-ranking female Agent of SHIELD?
Would also be good to find a way to include Peggy Carter somehow. Or anyone really, as I really hope this series continues.
PS, you should post this on AO3.
Chapter 6: Good chapter. I like a bit of plot with my smut. And I also felt that Hela's conquests went a bit too easy, so it's nice to see her get at least some resistance. Also fun to see Darcy go all (horny) fangirl over Black Widow.
Chapter 5: More toys for Hela to play with! She's collecting quite a harem.
Good to see more of this.