I'm a little surprised Wanda was so anticipated. I don't think I saw her episodes when the first broadcast only when I watched the whole series on Marvel's youtube channel a while back.
Still I think you've done a good job with her and her personality! The abrasiveness but a soft spot for Kurt is cool and good continuity with the show and fic, when he broke up with Amanda being linked to Toad's shenanigans with his holoimager, iirc.
A little thing I noticed, Kurt starts out trying hard to say Wanda correctly but by the end of the conversation slips back to 'Vanda'. Pretty cool.
Wanda's outfit sounds so sexy, maybe a little based on her 616 get up with the corsetry? And the action was getting nice and heated before the end!
With the mention of Apocalpyse we must be getting near the end of show and fic alike.
Oh this was a lovely chapter. I do like how mature you have these two be. Unlike what happened with poor Amara last time.
Is it intentional you're using * in place of speech marks though?
I did notice the dream like nature of the scene and it seemed different from your other writings, there was abduance of description in the opening that did make me thing more dream/disney inspired. Jean-as-ariel was fun! Even down to the puns, lol. The mention of sirens as well was a call back to the episode with the sirens. (come to think of it, Kurt totally should have got it on with a siren)
Nice! I love it. You perfectly utilized Jean's telepathy in a novel, sexy sort of way. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if this happens with a lot of psychics, finding themselves intimately involved in the wet dreams of their friends. It makes sense, all the sexy things people think about at night. Kurt certainly has those thoughts and they made for a colorful, creative scene. Great work, as always! Please keep it up.
MarvelMaster616
Oh so few Jean/Kurt lemons makes me apreacite this more, though i am curious if you well get Wanda in on the fun.
Another fun chapter. Great work, as always! Amara's sex appeal always seems to get downplayed, especially in X-men Evolution. But I think she has always had a more open side to her. You really played that up here. She wasn't as shy here. She even seemed to embrace some of Tabitha's sexy quirks. That was a nice touch. That bit at the end though was gold. Definitely one of my favorite parts. Again, great work! Keep it up, my friend.
MarvelMaster616
Ooooh. Oh no, Kurt. Well it's not mystery why that relationship isn't continuing. Lol, poor Kurt.
Nice chapter as awlays, nice stuff with both of them missing Tabby and how that led them together. Interesting use of some of Amara's 616 backstory as well.
That was a lot of fun. I miss the dynamic between Tabby and Amara. They were such a colorful pair of friends. They definitely came off as girls who would share a lucky guy in a three-way. I think you captured Tabby's playful voice here perfectly. You also captured Amara's Brazilian sex appeal perfectly, as well. It was fun, sexy, and well-written. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the excellent work!
Oh that was more that worth the wait. I always love you deft handling over the characters and i do love the contrast between Tabby's go-for-it attitude and Kurt reining her in and being more gentlemanly.
Your descriptions of Amara are heartstoppingly gorgeous and I real love the moment where Kurt first seems them kiss and feels as much like he's intruding on something special as just going woo! girl-on-girl.
Threesomes are hard to do and keep everyone involved and in mind for the ready but you do a good job using everyone and Kurt's tail helps keep everyone happy which is genius. The lack of full penis-y intercourse is also fun; as every you straddle the line between porn and erotica, smut and character really well.
Great chapter! Love it.
Oh man, it;'s not the universe that hates Kurt it's the author! lol. Poor Kurt's miseries continue here but as you say ther'e s canonical basis. Mostly because the fourth season was so short (9 episodes) and didn't really have any Kurt centric episodes!
According to the wiki though she did appear one more time in the baseball stands in "Under Lock And Key"
Anyway great job with this chapter showing poor Kurt's troubles and heartbreak.
I finally get up to date on this fic and it's a cliffhanger! If I'd waited for a new chapter to be released like normal I wouldn't have htis problem. lol.
Very fun chapter though, surprised it took us this long to get to BJs! Tabitha's fun carefre attitude seems to be just what Kurt needs to get over Amanda.
And the next chapter's potential threesome looks amazing! Can't wait.