Don't mean to be a dick but the whole story is about how miles is better and peter was a dumbass for taking of and flaking on their anniversary but the you show a cut of him battling for his life for the whole world putting his duty before his needs and put a Badass line in to finish it I love the story its fucking hot but for you to put how big a hero peter is in the middle of it kind of ruins everything after if you are thinking about how Badass peter is and how Mj and miles are shitty people being petty rather than justified black cat is still cool because she's not dating peter and is a villain but for his wife and a hero to do that and then for you to put miles should still follow peters lead shows that peter is the best person in the whole story (black cat is a villain and doesnt count)
All's well that ends well. While I do hope you have more in store for this trio I'm interested in the Black Panther/Sue Storm/Emma Frost fic you mentioned on your FF.net account.
Thanks. That's more than I've been able to do these past couple of years. Glad to see you're still plugging away at this story, and I agree with Miles --- Peter definitely shouldn't have skipped his anniversary. Looking forward to the next chapter, even if, as my favorite character, I'm not necessarily looking forward to Peter's reaction when he finds out.
Definitely better than nothing. And now that Felicia's here, I'm excited just imagining how she and Mary Jane are gonna put Miles through the sexual wringer. Thanks so very much for updating! Keep up the great work!
I'm reminded of when Superior Spider-Man was first announced way back when some people speculated that Miles would be the new Spider-Man. Anyway I like what I've read so far, mainly how you've avoided some pitfalls in most cheating stories, and I'm eager for more. Also aside from MJ and presumably Black Cat will any other women be featured? If so I'd like to see Silk and Ms. Marvel (Kamala Khan).
Actually a very promising start. And now Black Cat's getting involved, too? Even better. Will the Spider-Women (Jessica, Spider-Gwen, and Silk) make appearances in this as well, perhaps? And will Felicia be content for long with just watching Mary Jane and Miles? This is all so very exciting, and very much better than I thought it'd be at first. Looking forward to more of this amazing story. Great thanks.
Re: Chapter 1
Very promising beginning.^_^