Well, this was definitely a fun read. Enjoyed every word of it. Mary Jane and Emma Frost getting down and dirty with 12 Hellfire Club soldiers at their disposal? I had no idea how hot that combination would be until you came up with it in this chapter. Excellent. Most excellent. Really looking forward to the next chapter now, and the opening flashback with Flash Thompson . . . surprisingly nice guy, that Flash. Oh, well, definitely gonna be waiting with anticipation and bated breath for the next chapter, since if the end of this one means what I think it does . . . Spider-Man's gonna get his world rocked by the Red and White Queens of the Hellfire Club!
Story is great so far, and it's shaping up to be a lot of fun. But I hope MJ will be Ok in the next chapter.
I am a little concerned about MJ's plan and how that could endanger her employees. Maybe they could alter the plan so they are there to take care of heroes' stress and such? Eh whatever. I'm sure whatever comes next will be good.
I like where this is going, hope there's a penthouse gangbang next chapter. Looking forward to whatever especially next
Interesting second chapter but i'm more curiouse what will happen in next chapter, will Mary Jane and Ema do each other or will they have something else like orgy and will Mary Jane cheat on Peter and if she does i hope Peter will be ok with it because i would like to see Mary Jane with other men and women in this story and still with Peter but either way i'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope for some hot sex scene.
Really good second chapter!
The interaction between Mary Jane and Peter Parker was lovelly and really sexy.
Now I am interested to see what will the next chapter be about and if Mary Jane will either have sex with Emma or have an orgy with Emma! Hope to see Peter having more action with MJ and maybe other ladies along with MJ!
As always great chapter, so keep up the good work!
Ah, another great chapter. Perfect definition of plot with porn. As before, I loved the interplay between Mary Jane and Emma Frost, and how MJ stuck firm to her newfound sense of responsibility. I also loved the flashback with her and Peter, and Mary Jane trying to work out her feelings for Peter and her feelings about her feelings for Peter. Oh, and Emma and MJ drunk on Nova Roman wine? I'm looking forward to the fun debauchery they're going to get into next chapter (hopefully). Thanks for writing this wonderful piece of art that captures at least some of the best of Mary Jane's character and her relationship with Peter/Spider-Man, far better than current canon comics have.
LoL wat a Cliffhanger!!!! Can't wait for the Orgy!!!
When's the nxt chap coming?also right tags
Excited you're doing a sequel! Can't wait for more!
Wow!! Great Come back Mann, very excited for next parts, wonder if Shanobi Shaw will break the Prison and get his Revenge on the X-men, Whether Marrie Jane and White Queen will team up with the x-men and spiderman, and will there be an orgy between all of them!!!
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