Read chapter 18 and have to say...I'm a little disappointed. Everything up to chapter 17 was great and on point for me and for me, chapter 18 kills it. I hope Chapter 19 is better :/
I absolutely love this story and I'm dying for chapter 18 :D
I am loving it!!! Please continue. You write very well.
Love it!!!'n I hope you continue
Please correct your disclaimer.
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