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hot so far-gonna finish?

when will have next chapter?

A great second chapter. Definitely enjoyed the dream sequence, though I must ask if that was the same Akame from the anime and manga Akame ga Kill. Aside from that, it's rather fascinating to read from the symbiote's point of view, how clinically and analytically it addresses its research into human copulation for the sake of improving Peter and his relationships with the girls/women in his life. Looking forward to The X-Factor, guessing it'll take off from the episode where Spider-Man and Wolverine end up switching bodies because of Mesmero, or will you be introducing some X-girls in that chapter? Either way, should be a fun read.

Gonna guess the appearance of Kitty, Rogue or X-23 in the next chapter.

Well it was a little rough at the start there, a lot of skipping around and it did seem a little rushed through but about halfway through you seemed to have leveled off. I think you had the same issue with the start of your last story as well. At any rate now that the set up part is out of the way I hope to see more like the second half of this chapter as the norm with you taking your time with the story. It should be interesting to see how this take on the symbiote will go.

Awesome story, please focus on it

Oh, this was great. This was positively great. Once again, you've struck gold . . . black gold, I should say this time. Interesting that you incorporated Maya Lopez (Echo), Julia Carpenter (Spider-Woman II/Arachne/Madame Web II), and Debra Whitman; will they be important later on? Also, definitely enjoyed this chapter and it being so full of Peter/Mary Jane goodness . . . although it being a dream all along was kind of confusing at first. Of course, now that the symbiote has learned the complexities of the human female from temporarily bonding with Mary Jane, I'm guessing it's going to give Peter more of an appetite for the female body in the course of wanting to learn and experience more, and there are so many lovely girls and women they could start with. Looking forward to Ava in particular, as I'm a pretty big Spider-Tiger shipper. Great opening chapter.

here we go, the first review on this site This is a good story and pretty solid. I do however have a request. Black Widow in the group? Please? Its rare to see her in anything at all.