rate_review Reviews

i like this story. the plot is more interisting than the sex

Pretty good start, but I wish you would have concentrated on MJ and not Peter here. Heck why don't give him amnesia (cliche I know) just for the heck of it and let her deal with that for a while. Skipping back and forth in time felt pointless, why not start with what happened or skip it like you did in the beginning. Having this situation where it's an after battle scenario, just was more gripping for me, than reading what actually lead into it. But still a good start, please write more !

Well this is interesting, normally you do DC or X-men related stories so this is quite the surprise, a pleasant one I might add. Can't wait to see more.

Feals like a dream I ones had. Exelent as always though !