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June 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm the first? I feel only slightly lucky. Sorry, its true, BUT it is also only the first chp. You had the odd word here or there where I would have used something different, not just a couple errors, and its rather pedestrian (despot takes a local girl for some fun).
Your heroine though Is already marked by his sigil? Do look forward to where you take the God of Mischief.
Your heroine though Is already marked by his sigil? Do look forward to where you take the God of Mischief.