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You can always use Fem!Loki. Sif dominates the witch to her side. 

Very good as a version of the "character dominates entire universe" trope. It's still fairly repetive but there's enough variation in how long it takes the girls to break to keep it from feeling to formulaic (the three chapter Maria Hill and Black Widow arc was certainly a standout." My own predelictations lean toward turned tables, but I don't hold out hope for someone topping Sif. However, one way or the other, this series should probably end with Hela.

10/10, got a thing for Sharon Carter

One of the best stories on AFF I think

Really happy that you brought in Peggy to the story. I was hoping you would. Now once we get her broken then I wouldn't mind Sif finally put in her place. 

Great story. Especially liked the Maria Hill chapter. Have been wanting a chapter like that for awhile as it is usually her topping other women (mainly Black Widow). 

Not sure how many more chapters you have left for the series but do kind of hope that things get reversed on Sif in the end. Maybe Lorelei as I really liked the actress that played her on AoS. 

Such a well done story. It's a fun vehicle for going through the women of the MCU, plus I love how it builds up, keeping some of the characters from the previous chapters around. It makes it more than just a generic collection of story, plus gives all kinds of fun combinations. 

I especially loved Pepper's appearance, fun premise plus Pepper doesn't get nearly enough of a role in stories like this. 

Great fic. 

I'm glad to see you got around to including Wanda, of all the MCU women she's been a recent obsession of mine. I really love how you did a corrupted innocence thing with her submission.

I found the idea of the story very interesting, however the power might become too convenient for Sif and kind take away the fun of seduction and breaking. Since the power is from Lorelei, maybe she might be able to resist the power at certain level and Sif need to make some extra effort to make her complete obedient.

It is sad that MCU never focus on the female characters in comic very much.

Thanks for the feedback. I did consider having Lorelai's power changed or strengthened, but Sif is the more recognisable character and I liked the idea of her being cursed and then using it to her advantage. I'm definitely going to have Darcy being the focus of the next chapter, possibly followed by a Darcy/Jane/Sif threesome, before moving onto the other women in the Marvel universe. Not sure about the order but The Black Widow is a must, as is Lorelai. Wanda, definitely. Frigga, probably at some point. Valkyrie and Amora haven't appeared in the movies or anything yet so I'm not sure at the moment, but if they do I'll include them for sure.

Awesome fic.
I waited for a long time for this type of scenario, the power of Lorelei use against woman. I thought to see Lorelei use this power but with Sif it's excellent and I like the idea of a curse and Sif who after a time likes her power.
I really hope to see the continuation of this fic with more of Jane and Darcy and also with other woman of marvel film universe especially Lorelei and Wanda.
I would really like to see Lorelei power use against her and she finish by become the sex slave of Sif and if in fact Lorelei is disguted by the sex between woman (for her it's a curse) it's still better.
I would like also to see more Asguardian woman of Marvel Universe like Amora, Valkyrie and Odin's wife who became slave of Sif.
It's my favotite of your fic with Faith and the Charmed sisters.
I look really forward to read the next chapter.