rate_review Reviews

this chapter was good even though it was limited by the nature of their bet expecting to get hotter as the tournament continues.

Characterization: good. Smut content: good. Story: good.

Among other things, I like the dynamic between Bobby and Jubes, and also that they each have some experience and aren't "total" virgins. The setup was an intriguing wrinkle too. Only thing I'll ask is that no matter who wins Week 2, have the description be a tad longer.

Sports talk still means nothing to me. Lol. But I did enjoy the handjob scene there's a nice mix of fun, banter, with the implication of denied feelings.

nice job.

Ha! What a fun little idea for a fic. Though I know nothing of american sports. Will the winners of theses bets be determined by the winners in real life then?

Well this is a nice little treat with an interesting format. Not a lot of people do X-men Evolution stories anymore, but you still stand out, my friend. You still put an admirable level of quality into each story. For that, I thank you. But what makes this special is that it combines two of my favorite things: X-men and sports. I love it!

I like how you set up the stakes here, having a specific reward for each level. The end part definitely raised the stakes a bit with Bobby challenging Jubilee to go full service, so to speak. lol It'll be interesting to see how this plays out. Any chance other characters will get involved? Or will it only involve Bobby and Jubilee? Either way, I look forward to seeing more. Keep up the awesome work, my friend! Take care.

MarvelMaster616

so far I'm loving the story and its premise. even though I hate basketball in all its incarnations! I think the pairing of Bobby and Jubilee is a really good idea, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :D