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I'm really enjoying this, that bit with Rogue was downright evil, and awesome! :D

Poor Bobby. He's had a rough couple of weeks. lol And man Rogue, that was cruel. But I liked it. This chapter felt more like the Rogue I came to know and love from the 90s cartoon. Smart, sassy, sexy and an unapologetic tease. That's something X-men Evolution kind of forgot. In fact, every single medium of X-men appears to have forgotten that side of Rogue. It's sad really. But I digress. This was a good chapter and one that gave Rogue a chance to have fun. But at some point, I hope Jubilee stops tormenting Bobby. I think he's earned a little slack. Keep up the good work, my friend. Take care!

MarvelMaster616

Lovely chapter! Especially Rogue's guest appearence and advice. It's like you know I like her or something :P

Good charter stuff here. very interesting Bobby turning her down like that. Presumably he's just realised he doesn't just want to fool around with her. And suddenly doesn't want to. Cool stuff.

The story continues to entertain. I'm a little sad Bobby didn't get to see anything more than an upskirt :P But it helps build up his feelings of unease and frustration.

I like the whole 'you mean you're not?' thing from Sam and Dani and the not-sexts were funny. Good job.

poor Bobby! sucks to be a loser in a bet like that. great chapter! keep up the good work but don't push yourself too hard and fall behind on your work. :)

Slightly disapointed that things didn't shake out right for Bobby, but this lets the story go in a more in-depth direction. I approve.

(note: I've been a Duke fan for 20 years, and were this situation to happen with me, I too would curse them unendingly.^_^)

Read the full chapter 4. Some nice build up of the UST here. Interesting that now it seems to be Jubilee who wants it. It'd have to be with that bet result. I thought from the start that jubilee winning the last one would be the most interesting scenario.

After all, the bet says he can't masturbate not that they can't continue fooling around...

Haven't forgotten about this story, my friend. As of today, the tournament is over. Duke has won. So I guess that means Jubilee has won the bet. Does that mean we'll get no sexy finale? I hope not. I'm confident you'll find a way to make a happy ending out of this, pun totally intended. lol

This was a really great chapter the perfect mix of experienced and inexperienced, and truth be told what guy doesn't like a good facial. :D

In the meantime how about a cliche chapter where they get trapped hiding somewhere and end up watching one of the other couples engaged in carnal activities. ;)

Great chapter. I really like what you're doing with them, emotions wise. The uncertainty and hesitancy on both sides, is very interesting. I like that Kitty is giving Jubilee all the blowjob advice.I also like the side-pairing of Sam and Danielle.

Silly Jubilee though! Should have taken the offer of giving each other head there...