rate_review Reviews

Loved this story, really would love to see more stories done as sequels following some of the other X-Men as well.

Huh! Not what I was expecting to finish up(was wanting a bit more smut), but it's nice to see a happy ending with no doom 'n gloom. "Jubilation Drake" has a ring to it. Well done sirrah!

Just finished reading the final chapter. Overall, a job well done! Once again, you've written an engaging, well-developed story. It hit on all the right emotional chords. It was funny, sweet, romantic, and sexy. It was basically the complete package. March Madness might be over now, but you found a way to make it even more enjoyable. I'm not a big Bobby/Jubilee fan, but you really made their relationship here feel fun and genuine. That's quite an accomplishment and for that, you should be proud. Again, great job. I really enjoyed this and I look forward to seeing more of your stories in the future. If ever you want to discuss ideas, feel free to contact me at any time. Until then, take care, my friend!

MarvelMaster616

reviewing chapter 9. So all that flirting was Jubilee setting him up, very clever! Great chapter love the whole thing going to read chapter 10 now

About time! The only(and I mean only) ding I'm going to give it is that after all this time, the sex scene was WAY too short. I was hoping for more of a 'Kitchen Sink' treatment(as in 'everything but the...') Still, very good. I like.

That as a very nice scene. Definitely felt real for their first time and the aftermath was intriguing. They're sort of together but still very unsure and shaky relationship wise which definitely makes sense. And wow? All virgins? Surprising and interesting there as well.

Hope its going to work out for them.

Chapter 8 review. Sorry it took me so long to read and review. Anyway, That was fun. Jean had some nice banter in there. Though it does seem weird that she can and will literally stop Bobby from moving when he tries to jack off. Think a voice in a ear would make him jump/stop what he was doing. Always makes me wonder what the penalty would have been if he had welshed on the no-wanking deal.

Still I do like Jean and her message of 'just make your mind up!' works for the story and as her delivering it considering that was pretty much how Evo depicted her relationshup with Scott.

I was wondering whether we were going to get some action her. Especially when Jubilee got involved but the chapter didn't seem long enough. Cruel to cut it there but since i delayed so long Chapter 9 is up for me to read straight off. Hurray!

chapter 7 was incredibly good I never expected him to get flashed by both Tabby and Amara, but it looks like he's going to be teeth by just about every girl in the mansion. lol

Loved this latest chapter. Man, Jubilee was a real bitch, getting the other girls to tempt Bobby like that. But now she's finally making it up to him. Justice will hence be restored. lol Really enjoyed Jean Grey's little scene. I can totally see her doing the Jessica Rabbit bit. In fact, I can see Scott enjoying that even more than Bobby. lol Maybe in another fic. But I think Bobby has been tormented enough here. I'm glad he's finally getting a chance to hook up with Jubilee as he tried to do with the bracket. Looking forward to the finished product, my friend. Keep up the great work! Take care.

MarvelMaster616

ha ha! You're enjoying dragging all this UST out! It's getting a bit sillier and funner now, whereas you'd done more character work before. Still I enjoyed it. There's a nice sense of realism about your descriptions.

Oh and clearly Jubes has told everyone about the bet right? That's why all the girls are showing off in his no-wank time.