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for Topping Pepper

by Ksennin

person douglas
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, rubbed another one out! It was (is?) hard to follow that little bit of interplay just before the break between scenes, but its good!!! Its me, I'm letting my mind wander back and over those few unfinished broken sentences, wondering what their limits might be? any safe words? Pepper realizing Nat has Alot more planned than she at first guessed? No, its all very good, as is......... but, this is me, hoping a little more fuel can get tossed onto the fire.