rate_review Reviews

This was a very nice little story. The writing style was good and I could definitely see it fitting into the comics. I just wish it had been longer. Take a little more time in describing things and making them last a little longer and this could be a great story. Hope to see more from you in the future.

Having the issues of the comic itself, I say this is a solid attempt at putting the images from the few pages of that mini-series into words. Though the images heavily imply what was going to happen in the next few moments, sometimes its better really get into the details. I'm sure a lot of readers will say the comic was better but sometimes the comics don't really convey what the minds at the comic industry try to create.

I would like to see if you could bring similar scenes to life. Maybe something from the Avengers, either New Avengers or Mighty Avengers. Maybe even the Dark Avengers. Pretty sure there's been plenty of times where two characters get together for a one-night stand of sorts.