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for Just Relax

by Khaleesi-Of-Dragons

person gnome_man
schedule June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
In my previous review, I didn't notice that there were more than just one chapter, so I didn't do this piece justice. It is a sweet and sentimental work that illustrates both the author's talent and her need for improvement. I loved it, frankly. There were "tense" issues and misspellings, but those are technical details that simply fade away when you consider the quality of work her.

Truly excellent work.
person gnome_man
schedule June 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very funny. I liked it quite a lot. Can you continue?